Meant to review this yesterday, but you know.
Now, let's see here...It was good, but it definitely needs some work. Plot definitely needs some improvement, if not a total revision. Grammar is disappointing, and characters, while interesting, could use a little more originality. Don't get me wrong, it was still unique, but execution wise it falls flat, and---and......
Scroo it. It was awesome and you know it.
Aznchau4ever wrote:Is it me, or am I seeing something meta about to sprout?
It's not just you.