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A New Enemy Arises

Postby CaptainAmerica2 » July 1st, 2012, 12:16 pm

GEORGE SERIES: A NEW ENEMY UPRISES

Note: I will edit this later as there is a lot of mistakes in this story. And that in the editing mode and word, it is in paragraph mode. But not appearing to you guys reading the story.


CHAPTER 1: An enemy uprises

“THANK YOU FOR SAVING US, GEORGE!!” the mayor said, placing a medallion on my chest. I was standing in front of the whole city in my glory. “For stopping a crime wave within our great city, I’d like to award this key to the city to you.”
Ecstatic is what I felt right now, wiping off tears of happiness.
I smiled towards the citizens, “I vow to protect this city twenty-four hours a day and you don’t need to worry about Houston again.” Uproar of cheering and applauding was wild. So wild that it could’ve destroyed a house.
A girl in the audience that had black hair, whitish brownish skin and 80’s clothes blabbered about something, “Hey superhero, you’re just a dumb kid. You shouldn’t be a hero, you should be with geeky people back at school.”
My face became purple with rage, “Well, you’re a naughty girl. That was impolite and just mean. Why don’t you stay away from this town if you don’t like me, for a decade or something?”
“I should, kelp for brains. This town is pathetic anyways.” She stomped out of town, cursing at us. People murmured about her, from “who is that girl?” to “I hate her attitude”.
“That young girl needs a lesson.” I said. I changed the subject after that, something wicked and exciting, “Let’s have a feast at my mansion!”
There goes that same craziness as last time, but at least bit calmer than usual. People walked beside me, having their faces close to mine. Their breath smell is like several garlic marrying onions.
“Please people, there’s enough me to go around.”

Remember that same superhero-hating girl? Well she was spotting wandering around the evil side of town.
“Humph, I will get revenge on that George boy. He will be annihilated before his very eyes.” She walked into a dark brownish castle made of stony bricks and steel pillars.
Lightning flashed upon her, as a shadow crawled behind her. That shadow was a guy with black hair and white skin. I knew him somewhere, but where did I meet him.
“And who might you be, small lady?”
“I’m Patience, seeking destruction against George.”
“George? That inferior superhero, I hate him so much. Let’s demonstrate your worthiness.”
Yikes! Now I realized him, I cannot believe he’s back. It’s Houston, the traitor teacher who turned out to be a super villain. He showed the girl to an old building.
“Break this building, and prove to me that you’re powerful.” Patience took a finger and touched the building. It was being torn apart, floor-by-floor. Surprisingly, nobody could’ve done such havoc before. Houston inspected the building in amazement.
“You will do fine, Patience. You’re hired.” She jumped in glee.

“Tell me, what was the inspiration for becoming a hero?” The mayor asked, surrounding people agreeing,
“Well, I was inspired in fact that my powers were discovered when battling Houston the first time as a student.” I explained, “These powers are used to stop crime.” Folks were fascinated.
“How did you think you got your abilities?”
“Oh I don’t know, probably because of the acidic radiation infestation in my town back then.”
“Weird—I mean okay then.” During the discussion, people were eating food like kings (greedy if you don’t know). After a while, we amused ourselves with fun games and we then slept.
Boom! Rumble! Crash! A shrilling thunderous sound woke us up, some screamed and some still was slumbering. The sound was as loud as a thousand trumpets playing altogether. Examining, we sprinted out and found nothing.
“What a waste of time, let’s go to sleep!” A person cried out, walking back to my mansion. But the weather was the culprit. To the north, the sky was clear with stars all spread out. But to the north, a super cell funnel cloud rotated around a mountain.
The mayor crouched behind my back, “Can you check it out, George?”
I didn’t hesitate, “Sure thing, Mr. Mayor.”
“Good luck.” I thanked him and we waved good-bye. I was actually nervous to go to the mountains.

At the evil side of town, Houston demanded something to Patience, “I’d like you to announce our plan to get rid of George and together, we’ll lead thousands of our crazy demons and if that wasn’t enough, the surprise will be unleashed.”
Patience stammered, “W-wh-what surprise. Sir?”
“You’re going to see after the invasion.”
“I bet it’s scary, dark and huge.”
“You’re correct, my loyal minion. Anyways, do you want some donuts and coffee?”
“Sure!” Patience and Houston went to grab some delicious provisions and laughed awkwardly. That was the worst laugh ever.

In the mountains during pre-dawn, I investigate that explosion that occurred during the night. All I found was a wonderful sky of celebration fireworks and a crowd of monsters.
“What’s going on?” I said to myself, considering that something huge is going on. Then I saw a human-like girl coming up to the stage with Houston, and an army of underworld monsters.
The girl introduced herself, “I am Patience. I used to be with George, but then one thing happened. I became jealous of him because I would’ve been a better hero and that’s how I became a villain.” The monsters cheered and applauded for her,
“The era of the superhero is over, and the era of the new world will begin.”
I had to stop her. However, there were so much beasts I couldn’t handle coming one kilometer alone. Actually, several old friends came aside me all exhausted.
Bob yelled, “George, we came as soon as we left to get you. Are you okay?”
I had to quiet him, “Silence, and there is a meeting going on. A new enemy has been created, and we don’t know her power.”
Then Houston walked up, “Patience, show us your incredible power by breaking another old building behind the stage.”
Matt said, “She’s just a human girl, what damage can she do?” Then the curtains went up, and boom! That rusty concrete structure exploded into a tiny million pieces. “I stand wrong, George.”
Monsters disintegrated, as some ducked behind their chairs.
“Our next goal is to destroy the town of Tropics.” Houston announced,
Jacob jumped up and taunted them, “Hey League of Super Losers, over here—“
I pulled him down, “What are you doing? You’re going to make us dead meat.”
“Yeah, but we stopped thousands of monsters and Houston before.”
“Agreed, but they have their secret weapon now!”
“Oh, I forgot.”
“Really?” I face-palmed, regretting Jacob ‘s terrible mistake. Houston pointed at us, “Get them. Patience, let’s go!”
“Oh no you don’t. I won’t let you destroy my hometown! If you really striving to do so, you have to get past me first.” Wow, what a waste of my life to challenge two most powerful super villains by myself but it would slow them down.
Houston got bored, “How pathetic! If you really think you could ever defeat both of us at one time. So easy.”
In the battlefields, monsters overwhelmed my friends. Getting power, did work to destroy most of the ferocious brutes. As a disadvantage, did not destroy all of them.
“Let’s go, we’re almost finished with these annoying pests.” James commanded,
“Let’s then help our friend.” Bob added, unleashing lava from the ground, which is unusual. “Did I really do that? Grabbing lava from the earth centre."
“Cool, I have an light bulb above my head. At a right time, you get lava from the field.” James explained, “Earthquakes can pulverize monsters, lava eruptions can melt them away. This area is the focus point in the city.”
Jacob was worried with the idea; “We can’t fight the monsters forever.”
“Don’t sweat, the earthquake hits in 3…2…1.” The earth rumbled as James’ countdown was correct. The earthquake so obliteration, it would tear apart Mount Olympus. “Bob, do it!”
“Lava, ERUPT FROM MY COMMAND!” Magma erupted from the centre of the earth, and splashed out onto the frozen remaining monsters. They melted into yellow, oozing sand.
“Success, now let’s defeat Houston and Patience together before they destroy the town and the world.” Sprinting onto the grass spots, they found me fighting against Houston. Patience dashed across the fields towards the city of Tropics.
“Two people go after her, while two people help George vanquish the evil doer.” Bob said,
“Maybe Jacob and Matt go after the girl, and me and Bob stay here.” James suggested,
“Agreed.”
“Hey Houston, look here. We’re going to pummel you now.” James mocked, having me he chance of hitting a strike on him.
“Yeah right, you can’t even hit me.” Houston said,
“We beat you once, and we can beat you again.”
“You may be on the ball, you did beat me once. But this time, I’ve gotten a super-strong minion to take you down right here.”
“Where?”
“Here—what? I don’t see her.”
“She’s going to town to destroy it without you.” I was shocked. Apparently, Patience might be turned out to be a traitor to Houston. All that training and exercise was worthless after all. But still, I cannot or Houston cannot prove it.
“I’m going to find her.” Houston ran down the hill, about tripped every time he went down hills and valleys. Everybody followed after him.


Crash! Cars swerved into trees, and buildings collapsing onto the ground and citizens screaming for their life.
“So relaxing. I love the smell and taste of chaos and destruction.” Patience smiled,
“Patience, I told you TOGETHER we would destroy the city.” Houston said,
She just gave him a rippled expression, “What do you mean ‘we’? Don’t you mean I? I don’t need you anymore; I’m trained well now. I’m going to get rid of you!” Patience lunged at my old teacher,
“Traitor! You abused me just to gain more power and try to destroy me!”
“Yep, pretty much that.”
“We’re going to end you, Patience.” He drew out ‘Le elemental”, I drew out my sword and my friends drew out their weaponry.
I wanted to lament what I said but, “Why would a super villain go against you? You’re a super villain.”
“I don’t know, but some other criminals would use other criminals to obtain control and invincibility. We got to prevent her from being immortal!” I thought I would never say this, “We need to work together to defeat the girl.”
“You’re just puny people, I’m marching to another super villain to use.”
“Oh, you’re not going anywhere!” I said, “Everybody, attack!!” At the same time, our weapons clashed together with Patience’s machine. The wind grabbed her by the machine and blew her onto a rocking chair. The chair moaned when she sat on it.
Patience looked at her thing, “Darn the lightness, it cannot help me.”
Houston clenched his fist, “Admit it, you’re finished. I thought you are as strong as a cheetah.”
“I am not finished with you. I have to deal with you by hand.” She attacked James that sent him far enough to not be heard of. With that distraction, I almost got hit.
“Admit I’m not strong? Now that’s just sick.” Trying to slice her with my sword did not work. The result was a metal sword bending. Bob rolled over when it was his turn, as Matt dived into her face. He picked up a pile of poison berries from his pockets. I never knew he would’ve dared getting some.
“Hungry? Eat some of this!” He stuffed the berries into Patience’s mouth, and she had the feeling of hurling.
“Delicious, but how is that—oh no, poison going into stomach. You may of won this round, but I will be back to get rid of you. Now anyways, I really need to destroy the poison in my stomach, but watch out, there’s a surprise in store for all of you non-sense heroes.”
Many people came out of their destroyed homes and non-living items.
The mayor congratulated us, “Thank these heroes for getting rid of Patience, as well as saving our town.” People really respected us as saviors of the town, and I liked it, especially when you’re the main hero of a town.
“Thanks Bob, you really did save the day for now.”
“Thanks, George.” Bob was confused for some sort of reason, “What did Patience mean by ‘surprise’? Is it bad?”
Houston beam became an frown, “Oh no.”

CHAPTER 2: ATTACK OF THE INVADERS


“What do you mean ‘oh no’? Something big that no hero would’ve ever beaten it?” Guessing this, I’d hope not it could’ve been scary.
Houston shivered, “Of course, I made something that would finally end your lives, but now the beast is tamed under control by Patience and there’s be no way to beat that thing.”
James groaned like it was Monday, “what now?”
“If we ever needed a plan, now’s the time.” Houston’s right, no time to be goofing off. That thing and that villain traitor would make the last fight with Houston look like a fight with a playground bully. The battle is actually a war in my definition.
“You know, we should have a war council in a place.” Jacob said. For time-consumption, that’s a great idea. Nobody did something. We just thought about it.
Bob said, “Brilliant Jacob! We really need a emergency meeting to discuss battle plans.” Then other people murmured in accord. Walking into Tim Horton's across from us, we grabbed some donuts and cappuccinos and sat down.
“Does one of you guys have a plan of some sort?” I asked, begging for a well-thought out plan.
Jacob raised his hand, “How about this? Set up defence fields along the borders of this city.”
“Not bad, but how are we going to do that?”
“Set up traps everywhere, have weapons ready to use, protective barriers and us waiting for them.”
I looked at him in the eyes, “How? We’re running out of time!”
“Believe me. It will work. Well most at least. One of the traps is a bridge wearing away when touched.”
“Excellent thinking. Let’s go men!”
You wouldn’t believe a kid would do construction. I mean a construction job for grown-ups. Well, us with one adult (Houston) will build a complex trap before Patience and her army of giants, demons, the surprise and other monsters get here.
We hammered nails! We sawed wood! We drank and ate for our break! And we did other things. We even did boring math and science stuff.
Houston congratulated us, “Good job people. We’re almost done building.” It took us around three to five hours to get around 90% of the contraptions finished. It is around sunset when completed everything.
Since then, me and the group gotten bored,
Matt suggested, “Let’s play badminton until they arrive.” Okay, playing sports during a major crisis isn’t a good thing, especially when you dig in playing. You could end up noticing afterwards the city is destroyed and your friends hate you for doing nothing to help.
Houston restricted, “Sorry Matthew. Doodling around is not on the list.”
“Okay.”
That’s when I noticed something, “I think the attack is going to happen early dawn, when we’re sleeping still.” I clarified, “Let’s get some shut-eye now.”
“You know, you’re pretty smart for a kid.” Houston complimented,
“Thanks.”
“You can tell when invasions are coming, George?”
“Sure, I did predict alien warfare before and man, they did not believe me.”
“Are you kidding, George?”
“Yep, I’m joking. But in 2200, aliens are going to destroy earth.” We all had a good laugh right now, and of course I’m serious that I’m not serious about aliens and aliens in the future. You would’ve thought that? I bet not.
“Good night everybody, and please sleep tight for our fighting.” I encouraged, slumbered immediately. After 12 hours, the alarm clock woke us up at 6 AM sharp. We brushed and ate healthy breakfast and exercised hard. Our faces was so red, people would think its sauce. With our final preparations, we kicked the door out and stayed on the sidewalk. It was a normal regular day. People walked their dogs, cars driving across the road, and it was peaceful.
I was confused; the enemy should’ve struck by now.
BLLLLAAAARRREEE! The warning alarm went off.
“The army is upon us. Come on! Into the city.” Sunshine heat sprayed onto us, like it’s a sun UV -30 product.
“Don’t look at the sun, it burns.” I warned, trying to cover my eyes and ears.
In the city, the army is carrying a pink and purple striped banner with a message saying ‘give up and give us what we want or we will destroy your precious town’.
Citizens of Tropics went in a pandemonium, smashing precious valuables and bumping into each other. Some were injured and some died.
I gave my attention to the citizens, “People, get in buildings right now. This is a dangerous war between peace and order and chaos.” I drew out my weapon, and pointed and the monsters. Houston, Bob, Matt, James and Jacob tried to lead them into traps by running towards the bridge.
Patience was in a chariot carried by giants, “I’m back! And I brought an army to destroy you. You cannot stop me now as I grow in supremacy and I’m here to get the last villain and became invincible.”
King Chris was the last villain; he became part of our team. We have to prevent her from getting him. But the army had to be fought too.
We charged at the army with our new, deadly sharp supplies and clashed into them. Bob and James directly went out and made fun of them, “Hey, you’d freaks, come and get us.” About 25% of the army followed them to the outskirts of Tropics (the bridge). Patience was getting away as we fought manly.
“I’m going after her, you guys stay here and fight the monsters.” I had to, otherwise she would’ve gotten Chris and end this city and rule the world.
Houston sidestepped a monster and stabbed a giant in its stomach, gushing out bluish, gooey blood as it disappears into the underworld. While 33rd street was in destruction and disorder, Bob and James arrived at the bridge and tricked the monsters into thinking they would go onto the bridge. The whole thing was dissolving as beasts and demons screeched as they fall in the wide canyon.
Bob and James high-fived and sprinted to the town, worrying that two cannot beat the monsters alone.
“Hey Patience, you cannot get Chris. I will get him and we will escape you.” I said,
“So what? You’re not as strong as me; you cannot reach me from using him. I’m going to destroy you afterwards.” Her and me raced through the deserts for my buddy. You think I can’t win? Well heroes always win and villains always lose, that’s a real lesson to be taught.
Houston and Matt continued to fight hard. Matt flipped over a winged demon and sliced her head, and Houston rolled over to dodge a sword.
“We can’t handle this forever.” Houston complained. That could accomplish nothing.
Just before they were done for, Bob and James came back just in time. “Did we miss anything?” Bob said,
“Nope, just fighting.” Matt kicked and knocked out a giant before the giant could spew white, poisonous gas.
“You are going to be a barbeque roasted wiener first, George!” Patience grimed, trying to dive towards me. I could’ve felt how tired I am. It felt like I couldn’t touch anything in my way.
I wheezed out, “Almo—almost there. Ju—just ah—ahead.”
“Not if I arrive their first, and two I’ve unleashed the surprise on your so called friends. If you don’t want to your friends to die, then surrender to me and let me control the super villain.”
In the view, Chris watered his lawn. I thought there wasn’t water in deserts, or just barely little tiny lakes.
I called out his name very loudly, “CHRIS!”
“George? It’s good to see you again. How are you?”
“I have to alert you. A girl is going to use you to become invincible. Whatever you do—“
Patience interrupted me, “Non-sense, I won’t. Besides, ignore what he said. You’re a super villain and I’m a super villain. Together we can rule the world and destroy Tropics City.”
Chris abruptly told her, “I don’t know who you are and George is my friend, if you think he is lying, I don't. You are going to use me to be immortal and I cannot allow that.”
“We can do this, everybody. We have bombs and we can use it! Are you with me?” James said, distributing the atomic explosives to everybody. If you are one of the citizens, plug in your earplugs and close your windows. This is got to be an epic monster-removing experience.
One of the monsters gone commando, “We have to capture them or our boosss will slllaaay us.” They took that seriously. About 100 monsters desperately stampeded at them, throwing their weapons in the air.
“Now, fire them up!” Bob, James, Matt, Houston and Jacob lite their explosives and BOOM! RUMBLE! The atomic explosives frightened people and monsters. It really destroyed some of the houses near-by.
“Retreat! RETREAT! Before they do it again!”
Everybody cheered until a huge, indefinite shadow blotted the sun.
"Is THAT the surprise? It's darn big, and greyish. It's aroma is so stinky, it would melt a landfill away." James said,
"I'm afraid so. I don't know its weakness. But I heard a hero's friend could kill it."
I dragged Chris along the journey, "We've got to help them, they're in big trouble."
"You are so not going anywhere, punks!" Patience shouted, "First, you got to deal with me."
"No, we're going to run away from you." Chris and me dashed all the way to the city. This is really amazing, running can be a real exercise. I've gotten thrown off because of her spitball. That's not good.
"George, get up!"
"I'm up now!"
As I awoken, that beast overshadowed the city.
Patience laughed, "Oh, told you to lend me the person."

CHAPTER 3: CHRIS GOES WESTERN….


“How do we beat the overgrown enemy?” Jacob yelped, attempting to protect himself. Besides, we all know that saving your self doesn’t mean you cannot get injured, especially when it comes to a monster of the century.
Houston punched Jacob on his shoulder; yelling like a commanding officer, “Get up Jacob! The smallest thing we could do is try to slow down the fiend and avoiding it from crushing the city into pancakes.”
“Okay, just help me up. I’m feeling too nervous to climb back up.” James grabbed his hand and tugged him until he was on his feet. As it seemed, nobody was able to be as chicken as Jacob currently. Although he didn’t feel like a chicken, his entire body shook like waiting ‘till he was extremely hyper.
Anyways, Patience’s “big gun” advanced towards the city centre, blowing up structures out of Tropics. It was that strong if I told you already.
Nobody seemed to notice the big, hideous object from his or her houses as it screeched so sharply, it can break an ear of a human, or an animal if that was possible. The five heroes waited silently until it breeched security levels.
“So, anyone knows what’s its name?” Matt asked, considering it was a bad time to ask such a stupid question, but Houston answered.
“It’s the Constellation Canadian Bird, it was named that because…it’s Canadian and that it looks like…a bird.” That tells James, Matt, Bob and Jacob why the head was shaped like a falcon, and has the red maple leaf symbol on it.
In the fields, Chris and me tried to tackle our way through a series of tall sequoias from Patience. This was not the way to have fun on a break, saving the world.
“You cannot escape me, George.” Patience scowled, “Soon, you will be captured and you will become my minion, while I suck up the energy from King Chris.” She laughed, trying to claw us from the sky. My friends had to deal with the bird, worsening my day.
I taunted her, comprehending that I made a terrible mistake as she flicked her hand. I remembered that move when Houston and me had our final battle around a year ago. It flung both of us 3000 meters into the air. Did I tell you I was afraid of heights?
“Don’t look down, George!” Chris warned, “It will frighten you, and you’ll get devastated meaning you can’t fight again.”
“Look at me, do you think I didn’t know that?” I said, disagreeing with my brain not to stare below me. I wish we had parachutes to steady ourselves. Crunch! My bones cracked as we landed into the ground painfully. We moaned as we lost consciousness. In a quick last blink, we saw a black figure stood on top of us. It was Patience, as we knew in an obvious matter.
“How pathetic!” She said, leaving us here as she enjoyed the Constellation Canadian Bird looming over Tropics.
“Here it comes, guys. Be prepared.” Bob reported, retrieving his weapon from the previous battle from the army. The monster slithered behind a shop, hissing viciously at the town saviors. It wagged its tail against the shop, tearing the constructed building apart, brick-by-brick like Patience when she demonstrated her strength to Houston earlier. James jumped onto it and attached his hands on the bird’s back. Unfortunately, the giant beast smacked him off as if James were a medium-sized flea, easily swatted. He was hurt very badly. Everybody gathered around him, checking his pulse and placing bandages on the bleeding sports. They also wanted to see if he lived or not. It turns out he did manage to survive the fall. What good news!
Bob lunged at the monster with his sword. It shimmered as Bob nearly pierced the inside of the monster, as Houston tried to throw heavy objects at the hole fast. The bird howled. It began to dive down towards Jacob, Matt and James. They screamed as they ducked down to safety.
“Ready your weapons, down there.” Bob said, “Point at the bird. Come up at the scratch as you work on your math.” The boys finally got to do something important; they were as excited as a puppy receiving a bone or a treat. Obeying Bob, they drew out their swords and other weapons and aimed at an exact angle.
Chris and me finally found our consciousness, and woke up. We inspected both sides to ensure Patience was gone. My brain thought that she was in the city. We were alone once we looked in every other direction.
“Let’s help them, George.” Chris alleged. His voice faltered as soon as he spoke those words out loud. We were out of the fields, all dirty and tired and exhausted from running a lot. And we’re doomed. Patience materialized in front of us. She looked tensed, and well rested to battle again.
“You’d think you would get away.” She bellowed, “I’m not going to let you save your precious friends!” Patience punched me so hard, that I actually landed twenty foot from them. Chris decided to take a shot at kicking her, but failed. She also punched him. But since he was heavier than me, he only fell five foot from her. Once more, Chris tried to kick her crazily. Like I mean ultra crazy. He enraged. I tried to warn him, but he didn’t need it. Chris managed to leave a scratch on Patience’s face.
I encouraged him, like a gym coach, “Go Chris! You can do this, man! Don’t give up.”
“Thanks, George!” He said,
“No problem. Now, try to buy us some time. We don’t want to her to follow us or we’re in serious trouble.” Chris knocked her out a bit, but then she rolled towards him and tripped him until he was the one to sleep. Patience walked towards me slowly and steadily, thinking that I had no rescues or an absconding plan. But she was wrong; I dived underneath her after closing in on me and struck her by the back using my sword. Her eyes blanked to full, pure whiteness. Her body boomed, creating an enormous, and totally lava-hot fire. We left in disgust, our faces turning moldy green like a set-up for an eruption of food from a food-made volcano.
“RUN!” I screamed, looking back at the fire. “She’s reforming. Not to mention, how??”
“Right, and what’s next? Robots are evil--?”
Patience scowled. She was madder than ever, “COME BACK HERE, LITTLE BOYS! I’M GOING TO HAVE YOU FOR DINNER!” Her eyes flashed with anger.
Chris finally believed me, “No human can ever bust those moves and be alive again. She’s an alien.” I looked back again. I was more terrified than ever, like actually being in a school with strangers.
After I recovered from my shock, I realized we’re in the city. Now we can finally, at last, help out friends fight off the Constellation Canadian Bird. What we saw, they did a great job. They took it down and made a victory toast.
“You guys didn’t need our helps at all.” I said, smiling at them proudly. They showed great courage, bravery, and honor to defeat it. But then, the tangled beast freed itself and roared ferociously, as my eyes widened.
“Remember that the huge thing was strong too??” I retold them; “You could’ve just stored it into your memories!” Everybody looked at me like I was the critic at that moment. They were that stupid.
That’s when Patience marched into the city grinning, “Enjoying the show? It’s great, huh?” All of us clenched our fists towards her. We all hated her. But we had to deal with the big animal first. We didn’t shift one bit. We didn’t know what to do.
“How about start fighting it so it won’t destroy the city sooner?” Houston worried we might let that bird end millions of life. That, we reached on. The battle started when the bird rained poison everywhere on us. We avoided it as soon as it was upon our heads like a hawk above a prey.
Patience laughed deviously, “This gets interesting by the minute. I think I want to relax and watch the suffering.” The bird swooped down to grab us, but we dodged it, at least barely. Its wing caught James in his pants as the creature continued to attempt to snatch the rest of us.
“HELP ME!” James cried, “I’m afraid of heights and air-sickness.” He snuggled around the bird, loosening the arms of the beast. But he struggled of freedom.
I yelled as loud as I could, “Hold on, James. We’ll get you out, I promise to my bottom of my heart.” I’ve couldn’t help him, but I kept my promise through my heart. Bob dragged around his weapon, shooting it in mid-air. He hoped to have his mathematics correct. By a few inches short, it still got the bird, releasing James.
“Catch me! Catch me!” James said, closing his eyes. He screamed to death, as Houston caught him. It was a close call. The fiend was coming across a windowed house. I ran as fast as the wind, climbed a building, and fell into the bird’s back. Where the area that had the hole, the final stab was made and the monster whimpered in pain. Before I could finish, it recovered its hole and just slapped the heck out of me.
I thumbs-down to the guys, “Sorry guys. It just healed itself.” Jacob and Matt didn’t like the sound of what I said. The bird flew down the street. Everyone dashed several blocks until they could’ve arrive under the shadow of the monster.
Smash! Crash! The windows off houses, shops and business buildings shattered into sharp, pointy pieces, and cars and trees in parks were stomped. It really was the end of us. I took a lot of breaths waiting for something to kill me.
“I cannot allow this.” Chris frantically said, “I’m going to end this now!” I had to stop him; this was incredibly dangerous and risky. Like he can’t go up against a sixty-ton monster alone.
“Hey monster!” He taunted without fear, “YOU WANT DEATH! COME GET IT, YOU FAT BIRD.” The monster became very irritated. He came chasing after him. Chris pulled out a rope. I didn’t understand what he was going to do at all. But I know he was a brilliant, bright man who’s going to save the city.
I asked, “What are you--?”
“Be quiet, please.” He acted western now. The rope is an oval now, being spun and spun around until the perfect time. It was like cowboys use to do back in the days to capture animals and human enemies. It caught the bird at its neck and pulled it. Eventually, it came down meter-by-meter to the ground. It was weeping out. If it wasn’t evil, I would’ve felt bad for it.
Patience finally noticed by the tip of her eyes, “What?? No! You should’ve…should’ve surrendered.” She burned in frustration. She saw the monster die, came up to it and punched it.
“I shall excel my plan. You win the second round…for now at least. But I will take your super villain friend and force you to surrender.” She stomped, as we cheered for a while. But I felt something, the feeling that I never felt before. I became unknowingly emotional. Luckily, my friends noticed.


CHAPTER 4: THE DIVIDED HEROES!


“Come on, buddy!” Matt sobbed closely, “Stop. Stop, please. Tell me what’s happening to you.” I straightened my head towards Matt, who held me by the shoulders. After a battle like that, I don’t know what caused this casual sensation. Was it heights? Was it monsters? My mind wasn’t thinking right. I just was a little woozy and dizzy. It’s just that. No one bothered to call the ambulance for help me get better.
Chris shook me back to reality, “Snap out of it, George. We can’t fight Patience if you are down. Besides, if you don’t tell us what it is, then we don’t know how to cure you. Do you want that?”
“Fine, it’s because of heights and risks.” I explained, “It’s just, now I’m afraid of monsters and giant beasts. I would never risk my life against brutes. This is serious, man.” My friends gasped in surprise, like they would expect me to not fight crime again. That’s true. With the fear of monsters and/or risks, how can I help?
“Can we get back to celebrating?” Houston said carelessly,
“Houston! That was rude, where’s your manners?” James snapped, Houston looking ashamed. I stared at him vindictively, and in suspicion of treasury. Still, he’s a villain friend that was abused by another antihero. Okay, back to my illness.
“Well, what do we do now?” Jacob asked, confused.
“Then come up with a plot to take down Patience without George.” Matt replied, thinking that Jacob was not smart at all. I tried to disagree with him that I could help, but the phobic got worse somehow.
“George, I realize your complaints. But you have to stay here.” Bob said, “You’d die because of your fright. What’s worse? Death? Fear? You decide.” He was right; I was better off here than Doom Mountain. I do need a life, not a ghost life, but a human life where I can accomplish anything.
Everybody took a coffee break for now, discussing out-of-bound topics. They still didn’t call for help, like they were as lazy as a sleeping human who sleeps 24 hours per day.
Because of that, I yelled insanely, “CALL THE HOSPITAL, DUDES!” They finally comprehended that, exchanging looks. I don’t know anything else that dumb; especially everybody knows to call them for help. My friends grumbled, as they grabbed a phone and called for help. As I said earlier, they were exactly lazy, looking in their eyes. I had to do something about this fear, or I won’t fight crime again. I loved being a hero, especially when you get to be famous.
“Hello.” Jacob talked, “Our friend here needs help, he’s afraid of, you know, things. He has this sudden feeling that made him lightheaded. Can you guys cure him? Hurry!”
“Okay, but I need to know your name.” The doctor answered politely,
“Um okay. My name is Jacob and I’m near the center of the city.”
“Thank you. We’ll be there as quick as a snap.” That’s highly unlikely, because they are around 10 miles from here. A snap is like a wicked fast car; that is much speedier than a cheetah. But yeah, use that and you arrive faster than a snap. The punishment sense couldn’t be lesser now, as it continued to exceed limits that my brain could handle.
James clenched his fists, “We need help NOW!” He hollered impatiently, as he damaged objects to the left of him.
I tried to calm his rage down, “James. It’s no big deal. I can manage this. Please, don’t go berserk.”
“Oh, you’re not the boss of me.”
“Great, now you’re judge-mental?” I couldn’t bear to beat him to his senses. This would’ve gone ugly, but my guts told me not to sink to his level. James tried to strangle me immediately, as if I did something terrible.
“Judge-mental? JUDGE-MENTAL?” He screeched sharply, “You know, you are pathetic and—“
Bob taped his mouth shut, just until he discontinues fighting with me. “James. George needs our help and you just start fighting? So unprofessional.”
“But—“
“But what? I thought you were a great hero. But it seemed that you don’t care about George.”
“Please, Bob. Forgive—“
“Forgive you? I do not forgive mad-mans. Apologize to George and leave him alone.” He deserved that. He really did. James trampled my feeling. By this argument, I bet Patience was already finished her plan to capture Chris. This was his fault for letting ourselves down. Houston, who stood still with his arms crossed, his face was intense and he took out his frustration. “GUYS! IF WE WANT TO SAVE THE WORLD, THEN WE HAVE TO WORK TOGETHER.”
“Okay, just take off that scary face.” James shuttered seeing his anger. If his smile was not a smile, we didn’t want to see his unhappiness. We didn’t want to split, that way would cause trouble in our world.
“Let’s stop goofing around.” I scowled despicably, “We don’t want to serve Patience. I want to live my life normally, and to kill all of you for almost getting us tickets to Slave City.”
“Kill me? You can’t do that.” James abruptly said, balling his fists in front of me. “I’d like to see you try.”
“James, please stop.”
“Make me!”
“Oh, oh. Maybe I’d like a piece of pie off of you.” We strangled and wedged each other, and again, I made a big mistake. I was trying to solve conflict, but instead got caught into it. After the big fight, we didn’t look at each other. You’d think he’s my friend and we should undo our mess. But we were enemies now, not looking into one eye or even breathe in our air.
Houston demanded infuriatedly, “STOP! Can you guys please make up? It’s the middle of a war. Please, we need to protect humanity.”
“Never!” We said in unison, “We won’t!” Both James and me stormed away from the group. They would’ve never seen us again, even if they begged to us, never.
How could I tell the story? Leave it to Matt.

Thank you, George. Now, really, James and George did not like each other. Next time they met, they would start a war as rivals. The question is, how do we get them back together? How can we solve George’s monster phobic? And how do we become a team again? This was not an easy situation, especially during a battle for earth.
I commanded, “Let’s find George and James. Help them be friends again and charge for Patience!”
Everybody listened and ran for George first. Unfortunately, things got worse. Houston stopped in our tracks, “Where do you think you’re going?”
“Duh. We are getting George. Weren’t you paying attention?”
He laughed evilly, “I tricked you.”
“What?” I asked in confusion,
“Patience was not my traitor. We pretended to hate each other, just to capture Chris. Now that George and James are gone, this will be simple.”
“You set them up?”
“Yes. I also made your friend afraid of beasts.”
“Treason! I knew it.” My body was beaded with fury. I couldn’t be any madder. But while of that, Houston grabbed Chris and threw him into a potato bag. Without George and James, nobody was able to defeat him.
Bob, Jacob and me rushed towards him, hoping to free Chris from certain doom. But since Houston was faster, he outran us. “See you later, suckers!”
It was a disappointing day. We let the world down again, and let two friends become rivals. We sat down, as we frowned. Our heads pointed down. It was sunset right now, as the sun waved goodbye.
“I can’t believe it.” Jacob assumed, “Our heroics are down in the drains.”
“Well, look at the bright side. At least we tried our bests, and that counts as good deeds.” I said smiling happily.
“How’s that going to help?” Bob questioned, “We’re in danger of being executed.”
“Enough, we just fix this. All we need to do is search everywhere for George and James.” Jacob suggested.
“How about splitting up into three groups.” I explained, “One of us go find George, one of us find James, and one of us go rescue Chris.”
“Bright idea, Matt. That way, we can do things faster without all of us being in the same area at once.” We cannot give up that easily. If George and James would never be friends again, no! Bob, Jacob, and me can beat the enemies together and rescue Chris. If any mistake were to be made, the world would’ve been doomed. And us…we’d die being punished by the mayor.
“We’d better do this. I got a life to live.” I said distinctively, different things from others.
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Re: A New Enemy Arises

Postby CrazyMario » July 10th, 2012, 1:20 am

Er...try to have paragraphs. :)
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Re: A New Enemy Arises

Postby CaptainAmerica2 » July 14th, 2012, 3:34 pm

Actually, I copied it from word, so the story won't appear in paragraphed mode. But yeah, thank you for reminding me.
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