Warriors

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Warriors

Postby Firestar » March 27th, 2010, 7:46 pm

NOTE- this is from a book and i dont take any credit, and im only getting you to be interested in this series.

prologue

A half moon glowed onsmooth graniteboulders, turning them silver.The silence was broken only by the ripple of water from the swift black river and the wisper of trees in the forest beyond.

There was stirring in the shadows, and from all around lithe dark shapes crept stealthily over the rocks. Unsheathed claws glinted in the moonlight. Wary eyes flashed like amber. And then as if on a silent signal, the creatures leaped at eachother, and suddenly the rocks were alive with wrestling and screeching cats.

At the center of the frenzy of fur and clawss, a massive, darktabby pinned a bracken colored tom to the ground and drew up his head triumphantly. "oakheart!" the tabby growled. "how dare you hunt in our territory? The sunning rocks belong to ThunderClan!"

" After tonight Tigerclaw, this will be just another RiverClan hunting ground!" the bracken colored tom spat back.

A warning yowl came from the shore,shrill and anxious........

MORE TO COME IN THE PROLOUGE! (seriously it took me like 30 minutes to type this and this is only one page :? )
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Re: Warriors

Postby YoshiKid54 » March 27th, 2010, 7:56 pm

Great introduction!
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Re: Warriors

Postby MICrophone » March 28th, 2010, 4:48 am

Er…do we really need to post stories from books? I think this forum is designed for us to post our own stories in, not somebody else's. If you want to get us interested in a book series, perhaps you should create a book recommendation thread in Serious Discussion or Off-Topic.
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