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So, in the sake of not risking the integrity of a classroom friend, I moved this story to our group Tumblr page:

http://pointedcircle.tumblr.com/post/10 ... -cameron-j

So you can still read it if you ever chance upon it, it just won't be here.

Although the systemic emotion of the story merely aroused my misanthropy and self-loathing, from an artistic point of view, the impromptu aura and the chronological simplicity of it certainly emphasized the emotions and thoughts you were trying to convey, as did the originality of the plot and the according implication that the sentiments presented were deeply personal.

I would say it is quite effective.

I knew that girl was gay from the beginning. So MoD...

It was a nice read. The ending looks like it might open the possibility of continuing this story... many things are left vague... in a way that's better, but a sequel for this would still be cool.



...Someday, I'll write something... They used to say I was good for writing... My history teacher even nicknamed me "The Golden Quill". I wouldn't know, to be honest... But I feel I do like the idea of creating new worlds, and characters, and stories... For now I'll pour that creativity into my RPG. But someday, I'll create something else.

I want to tell a story.

...Why am I talking about that here

Edit: I seem to be the only one who has read this

Got to add this story to a Tumblr page for my school. It's the inaugural story for our lit mag's tumblr page. I even edited it a bit.

You'll have to click there to read it now though.