UnKnown Money

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UnKnown Money

Postby TrappedTime » May 23rd, 2010, 4:54 pm

~Preview~

Mike is a usual teen who wants nothing more than for his parents to back off. But he keeps a secret from them that they might never know. He holds an underground vault with an equivelance to about one billion dollars. he discovered and protected this stash from when the day he moved to the house as a kid.
It was a morning and Mike was walking around the square room, staring at the ceiling. He then stepped on a plank and it flung upwards, almost coming out. Just then, a square chunk of the wall came out and to the left. In front of Mike was a keypad with ten digits and an enter key on it. Mike entered "1337' and hit the enter key. The floor boards slanted down wards into a cave under the room. Mike entered catiously. Then he came to a door. The door was just a metal rectangle on hinges. He thought this was the end of the adventure. He gave a big breath out and the door swung open. that's when it happened. Mike saw the lights turn on and reveal the secret stash. It was no more than two feet high.He looked around and found a note.
| Dear Keeper,
This is a letter informing you about this large sum of money. I have left this here for you and within five years you will need to find me. Do not try to trace thi letter right now because I'm hiddin from the world and have no records. Here I have about one billion dollars. DO NOT SPEND MORE THAN HALF! I warn you for the future.
Sincerely,
Mugal Rod-d|

From then on Mike has been guarding the money. True, he didn't spend much, because he didn't know what to buy, but he did spend about two million. He owns his own house where he keeps his bought items. When the tiem came, Mike knew:
It was a day wehn he was in the park, carrying about $1'000 with him. He saw a man sitting on a bench with a newspaper with a title that said;
Man's Office Nostalgically Entertains Yorkies

He saw the first letters and it spelled out:
M____ O_____ N____________ E_________ Y______

The man got up and put his hand on Mike's shoulder. Mike screamed and the agent let go, letting Mike escape. From then on, Mike has been trying to hide his identity, even trying to change it, so the agent doesn't notice him. But every now and then he sees the same guy, wherever he goes.
Then one day something bad happened. Mike was invited into an office and to bring the money. He was told to go there to meet the man who left the money. But when her got there, he knew it wasn't the man. The doors shut and Mike had only one choice.
He jumped out the window, landing on a cart.
The mand qickly followed behind him. Running down the streets and to his friend's house, Mike's heart was racing. He told Mys the whole story. From then on Mike and Mys have been living in a secret location.
But of corse, they were discovered.
Now Mike has to keep a frantic chase around the world to stay away from the agents and also to find the keeper of the money.
Will he find a secluded location?
Will he find the man?
Why is the money so important?
Who is the man?
All these questions and more will be answered when you read.....












UnKnown Money
~Coming In June~
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Re: UnKnown Money

Postby YoshiKid54 » May 24th, 2010, 3:37 am

Good story. Can't wait for the next bits!
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Re: UnKnown Money

Postby TrappedTime » May 24th, 2010, 12:43 pm

Okay, finally got through with the preview.
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Re: UnKnown Money

Postby spookyghost » May 25th, 2010, 6:55 pm

...
Whats happening?
Good though.
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Re: UnKnown Money

Postby TrappedTime » May 26th, 2010, 11:12 am

Lrmaster132 wrote:...
Whats happening?


:facepalm:

Read the preview :awe:
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Re: UnKnown Money

Postby spookyghost » May 26th, 2010, 12:52 pm

TheBetterGamer wrote:
Lrmaster132 wrote:...
Whats happening?


:facepalm:

Read the preview :awe:

I did, but confusing.
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Re: UnKnown Money

Postby TrappedTime » May 27th, 2010, 11:34 am

Boy has billion dollars.
Agency after him.
He must find money owner.
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