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Re: Daily

Postby MessengerOfDreams » July 6th, 2010, 6:20 am

Teh next few days will be a bit crazy over in my residence, but once I get it straightened out, I will probably work on this. :D FOR MIC! FOR NINNY! FOR BRANDO! FOR THOSE OTHER 7 SILENT USERS THAT DON'T MATTER AS MUCH! ;) FOR THE MOTHERLAND!!!!!

Oh, and chapter 5 is out. Short, but it gives Isabel's backstory.
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Re: Daily

Postby UsuarioTHf » July 6th, 2010, 7:16 am

Awesome, MOY. Just. Awesome. This completed would be better than Chuck Norris becoming God. This is totally more awesome than Chuck Norris...It's even more awesome than...I ran out of ideas. But it's pretty awesome.
But really. In some way, you made a good choice selecting a crime-scene Story. People feel attracted to that kind of stories.
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Re: Daily

Postby MICrophone » August 7th, 2010, 1:58 pm

THIS…IS…BUMP TIME!!!!!!!

Er, so yeah, I read Chapter 5. It was pretty good. I do have two criticisms though. One is that I felt that it was not Isabel's style to just reveal all of the information like that. I would've thought that she would kind of fight David, almost like the Joker in Dark Knight, and would only reveal after they psychologically toy with each other the location of where she thinks the real killer is. Also, I don't think she would just spill out her backstory like that, but that aside, a revelation as big as the motive behind a serial killer's murders is something that is better saved for near to the end. That said, the story was still decent despite these flaws, and the writing was good. I'd like to see you keep going…
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Re: Daily

Postby MessengerOfDreams » September 6th, 2010, 1:21 pm

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Yes, I simply have no time to complete this. It's open to an extremely dedicated and skilled writer who wants it.
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I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3
Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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