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Postby Worst_master » June 25th, 2010, 4:09 am

Sorry, I come from hong kong, my writing is not so good of tense and grammer. But the content maybe'll help you.

Well, my writing of My Graduation Camp.

From 1st May, 2010 to 3rd May, 2010 is our graduation camp. We went to Suen Douh Camp(A camp nam in Hong kong) in (Hong knog) Fan Ling. All of us were very excited when we were starting off to the camp. When the principal issued to let us to leave our school, we got on the school bus immediately and we started our itinerary.
When we arrived, we took our baggage and we walked to the camp. First, we had our Welcome party. We met our tutors and teachers. Then, our camp life was formally started. The funny talkers told our activities in this camp. Next, the tutors talked with us and introduce both of our. After that, we can back to our bedrooms and change our clothes.
Then, it was the barbecue; we yearn for the barbecue for a long time! It is my favorite activity because the food there is very delicious. Also, built up the coal was funny. Moreover, barbecuing the foods with the charcoal was very exciting. We also can “steal” the food from others group.
Next, it was the Campfire party, the campfire was very magnificent. Also, the funny talkers back and taught us some strange dance. We are laughed of them.
Finally, we went to take a bath, then, we back to our bedroom. However, we didn’t sleep. Because we are not tired, so we chatted in the whole night.
On the second day, we did some strange morning exercise and we ate breakfast. Although the breakfast was not very delicious, it was not unpalatable. After ate breakfast, the tutors tell us to tidy up the football field...... The tutor said that they caught 3 snakes there, we felt afraid and clean the football field immediately and quickly.
After that, we had our groups games competition, there were ten games, we need to finish game and get some marks, the winner can get the prize at the end of the camp. We get high marks; however, we just get the first runner-up. My favorite is “Ring in rings”, because we need to be cooperating to each other to get out the rings.
Next, it was another competition; it was the mini-athletic games. We were excited; there were many “events”. I liked the ball game, we needed to use a big cloth to hold the ball and let the ball “jump” on the big cloth. Also, we need to give cooperation to finish the game.
Then, it was the free-time, we went to the rope course to play, although the higher rope course was closed, we went to the lower one, but it wasn’t so low......
Finally, we went to take a bath, then, we back to our bedroom. However, we slept. Because we are too tired, so we slept well in the whole night.
On the third day, it was the last day, after we ate the breakfast and lunch, it was the farewell speech, it was the end of our camp, all of our feel sad, we were reluctant to exit the camp, however, at 3:00 o’clock, we got on the school bus again and back to our school......
In this graduation camp, I’ve learnt that how to be independent and we need to be cooperate it others, also learnt how to wash dishes, tidying up the camp site...... Graduation camp was a very important thing in my life; I hope that I can go again.
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