A Memory's Shadow

[Magnen]

Just for future reference, Abby is (or depending on when you're reading this, was) taking questions on this thread: viewtopic.php?f=106&t=49684

Also, it has gone past this topic in post count, which is mildly depressing

Edit: Topic is now locked. Abby and I say thanks for all the participants

Also, the final post has an error in one of the sentences.
I swear, the ONE time I promise NOT to intervene via time travel, THAT happens.

[Konradix]

Oh yeah, I was gonna write something about the story:

Spoiler: show

At least I'm not a victim of the 'hit in the head' cliché.

Pretty good dodge, however you didn't dodge the Chekhov's Gun trope (not that it needs to be dodged )

I really liked it. For how short it was it gave a lot of background, action, while also keeping everything vague so that the reader learns with Abby.

Spoiler: show

And I really like that the amnesiac has someone who knows what's going on.