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Postby TrappedTime » May 6th, 2011, 8:42 pm

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1| In between life and death exists only one entity. 2| One life form that saves all from pain. 3| And only that one said entity can prevent death itself. 4| He is you, and you are the child of God. 5| Look not toward the stars for His almighty answers. 6| You must also save yourself from yourself. 7| But never forget those help lines, the ones that help along the way of freedom from condemnation. 8| And even if troubles do come about, do not let them disturb your peace of mind. 9| Because you are who you’ve always known yourself as. 10| Never stop hoping for better conditions, they will come.

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1| If life were to be wiped, only those who truly lived their lives would remain standing proud. 2| Their faces so vibrant with juvenile love. 3| It’d be almost as if it were the perfect moment, yet no one to take a picture for the sake of it. 4| When this day comes you will rejoice everything that is yours. 5| You will smile and laugh, not caring what about. 6| Time will be terminated and those cheeks will rose up like the sun in billions of years from now. 7| Never take a chance, do it now. 8| Waiting is what we fear, the most of all. 9| Let it happen when least expected. 10| Surprise or not, it is the moment for life we all need and want. 11| Only letting it pass by will make things worse.

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1| One soul, that’s all you get. 2| Don’t let it go to waste. 3| Cleanse it and breathe it, renewing every cell that does not exist. 4| Comes the time to face God he will be pleased. 5| Living on a prayer isn’t realistic, but living on your future is. 6| Satisfying results are the true outcome of living life. 7| Do so and extrapolate every last thought in your mind to everyone you know. 8| This isn’t motivation; this is God’s promise.



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Now guys, I want you to start writing. This first part isn't even near completion; and it's still in BETA!. But I want you to write the second... part. Give me your thoughts on 'success'. Define it until you can't define it anymore. Give me stories about success you've heard/experienced. Is there always a good ending to this? *Please, I would appreciate it gradually if you replied*
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