NOT ONLY IS PANIK 2 SYLLABLES HUMAN IS TOO TROLOLOL *shot*
I join your shot corpse, Red. XD
Great poem! I suck at poetry... The only thing was that sometimes you traded form for sensibility... I didn't understand what you meant at points. Nonetheless, something that I could never do.
9.5/10
Brethren of Distance but Close Enough
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This subforum is here for you to post up your poems or any creative writing based doodles or short stories you may have written.
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Re: Brethren of Distance but Close Enough
by SuperMIC » August 23rd, 2011, 1:23 pm
<Arocado:> I'm Asian.
PROOF.
^ Panik, you rock. ^
RUNOUW: DANGER AND DECEPTION: Read it! You could be in it!
PROOF.
^ Panik, you rock. ^
RUNOUW: DANGER AND DECEPTION: Read it! You could be in it!
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Re: Brethren of Distance but Close Enough
by *Emelia K. Fletcher » August 24th, 2011, 11:49 am
Niiiiiiiice. This should make Panik feel better about being the only Story Mod.
*is shot*
*is shot*
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Re: Brethren of Distance but Close Enough
by Panik! » August 25th, 2011, 1:17 pm
STFU, ABOUT SYLLABLES.
It's amazing :3
Nailed it, and it did make me feel better, btw. Thank you
It's amazing :3
Nailed it, and it did make me feel better, btw. Thank you
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