The 5 Poems

[ScardySquaril]

Thats right
I wrote poems in Language arts

....Fire (Acrostic)

Fire fighters try to battle it out.

Its heat is as powerful as a wild beast

Raging through the burning forests, spreading, fighters cannot tame the phoniex's flames.

Ending all the wildlife population, and the trees collapsing under the ferocious heat of the flaming beast.





....Storm (Couplets)

Gaganvir was outside, writing an fantastic story
As he wrote, he took a look at the sky, it became very stormy

He decided to take cover in a bush, but he saw a fox
So he decided to hide in a box

But the storm became intense, he had no choice to die.
But the delicious pie he saw, he sprinted to the Cherry pie.

He got saved, and the storm diminished and it became sunny!
It was so beautiful, he wanted to go outside to play, while he played, he saw a bunny!




....Trolling (Limerick)

Finishing trolling through through the city, he dashed to the next city.

He trolled the next city, and he recieved cash from the king of the city.

Unfortunately, the next city he trolled, he got whipped intensely

He was whipped in his hips and screamed OUCH very loudly.

He trolled another city, but this time, god punished him and recieved rash everywhere on his body.




....Happiness (List poem)

These makes me excited

My neightbours and friends

Bright and sunshine weather

Ice-cream? Oh yeah!

Succeed in goals, this is ultra exciting

Games! That is fun!




....Good and Bad (Diamonte Poem)

Good
Happy, helpful
playing, giving, working
Studies, noise-maker
Bullying, stealing, trouble-making
Rude, lazy
Bad

[sirknightingfail]

im pretty sure the "limerick" you posted doesnt follow the rules for a limerick.
i did like your "fire" poem though.

nice poems, showing some improvement. need to convey more emotion.

[ScardySquaril]

Thanks for the review
Arent Limericks like this:

Line 1 rhymes with line 2 and 5
Line 2 rhymes with line 1 and 2
Line 3 rhymes with line 4
Line 4 rhymes with line 3
Line 5 rhymes with 1 and 2

[*Emelia K. Fletcher]

Thanks for the review
Arent Limericks like this:

Line 1 rhymes with line 2 and 5
Line 2 rhymes with line 1 and 2
Line 3 rhymes with line 4
Line 4 rhymes with line 3
Line 5 rhymes with 1 and 2

Simplified:

The rhyming pattern is AABBA.
The syllables go 7-7-5-5-7, but 1, 2, and 5 can have eight or nine syllables so long as it flows naturally.