MP3Amplifier's Little Doodles

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MP3Amplifier's Little Doodles

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » May 16th, 2012, 11:37 am

These aren't proper official poems/stories, this topic of mine mainly contains ideas for future stories, short stories and poems I write when I'm bored and when something's on my mind. If these kind of topics aren't allowed in this forum or anywhere, then sorry, but I thought I should share some with you.. :3 These are called doodles by the way, because they are like art doodles, random little pieces of art. Except story doodles, random little pieces of creative writing ... :P

I wrote three poems, one yesterday, two today. They were just on my mind, and I try to put all my thoughts and feelings into what I write so I can hopefully share my emotions with everyone else. A few comments would be nice, but this is more like a note to myself and just some things to relate to:




Water Butterfly

My heart is an ocean,
A blissful oasis,
The ripples of the river,
A silent stream,

My ambition is the highest waterfall,
A still tarn,
The lowest brook,
An indulgent dream,

My soul is an electric breeze,
A warm spring,
The wildness of the waves,
Nature only I can bring,

The colour of my wings - the pattern of life,
The face on my back - relieves me of strife.




Full of Dreams

In a moment,
She is transported,
To the Himalayas,
Or an arid desert,

Smack

"That hurt. The heat of the desert burnt my feet,
Or 'twas the freezing cold, truth be told."

She visits the wonders of the Barrier Reef,
Or wobbles over a long bridge like a dangling leaf,

Spit

"Maybe it came from a fish below,
Or a damp warning not to proceed so slow."

Scowl

"This tells me I would much rather,
Not be with my deluded father."




Rain or Snow

Rain or snow,
I'll be there,
To hold you,
To cling onto you,

I'll embrace you,
Share your soul,
Deep within,
I'll be in your skin,

I'll love you,
Even when I'm away,
You'll feel my presence,
To cure your blues,

Rain or snow,
I'll be there,
To kiss you,
To comfort you.

Always.




This is the style I personally prefer to write in, where secret thoughts and feelings are given. Please enjoy, even if you don't quite understand it.. ^_^
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Re: MP3Amplifier's Little Doodles

Postby lordpat » May 17th, 2012, 12:59 pm

Gotta love it ;)

I like your poems, particularly the first one. I love poems with several posible interpretations.
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Re: MP3Amplifier's Little Doodles

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » May 18th, 2012, 10:28 am

Haha thanks. XD My first one was the strongest, I agree. :P
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Re: MP3Amplifier's Little Doodles

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » July 18th, 2012, 10:22 am

They weren't supposed to know that.. :ninja:
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Re: MP3Amplifier's Little Doodles

Postby MessengerOfDreams » July 18th, 2012, 11:19 am

ZealousMark wrote:Full of Dreams...didn't you write that at the dinner table? xD

That's ♥♥♥♥ great. xD
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Re: MP3Amplifier's Little Doodles

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » October 4th, 2012, 4:18 pm

What is most beautiful?
Love and hate. Two colours, one meaning.
Silent waters in an aqua paradise. The relaxation at nature's finest.
Pure white snow on a mountainside. Harsh yet striking.

None however is so beautiful as friendship.
You live to be alone or to be loved, never in between. Every moment, every pixel, every heartbeat. It clings on to something.
This is so we have something to live for. Friendship can bring heartbreak, bitterness and devastation, so why would people think it's beauty?

But the ecstasy of it rules over all, like a drug, it digs deep into your skin.
It isn't a disappointment or sin.
It is true human emotions. The thing that chills most spines. But how complex it is, sitting in a cage, unseen by others.
It is beautiful. Never deny it my love, for this is what we have been through.

Every moment, every pixel, every heartbeat. It's all me.
The time where you have me you'll think you've won. But when you find the truth, I'll be gone. And my presence will only be under the stars.
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Re: MP3Amplifier's Little Doodles

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » October 4th, 2012, 4:51 pm

Double posting because i'm in a poetic mood and love interests me enough to want to write about it, lol. :3

I left the water running down, constantly dripping into an abyss,
Looking at my fingers, they were shaken,
More shaken than the butterflies in my stomach.
I just needed to whisper, perhaps he would hear me,
Or think I'd been taken

By the freshest yet oldest feeling.
I could feel it as it touched my heart, it was healing
Me of my anxiety, something to calm.
This was new, an emotion I never knew existed. It wasn't even love, it was you.

But as the water stopped finally, no matter how infinite it seemed,
I then realised. This was just a beginning to it.



I'm pretty much writing this off my mind. XD If you can even begin to work out what either poems is trying to say i'd be pretty impressed. Because tbh i don't know. :3
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Re: MP3Amplifier's Little Doodles

Postby MessengerOfDreams » October 4th, 2012, 5:06 pm

I don't quite get it but I like that. I like vague. Good work.
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I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
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Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
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Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
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Re: MP3Amplifier's Little Doodles

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » August 4th, 2013, 2:13 pm

Felt like an appropriate time to post this:
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There she stood, the girl in the meadow,
Her head tilted left, her eyes full of sorrow,
I stared at her beauty; incredibly stunned,
Her natural physique- my wish of tomorrow.
My name she called, like the hiss of a snake,
Hearing her voice, I followed shortly behind,
Led me to the river, told me to look in,
Watching myself and my life rewind.

"Who was that girl staring back up at me?
Was that me?" I asked curiously.
"Your face was a mess, so lost from your war,
But now I'm here, dear, you may lose no more."
I looked up at her, a smile on my face,
Her elegance shone with a delicate grace,
She looked down at me, her eyebrows raised,
My naivety showed; I was lost in her gaze.

I gave her a name and a space in my mind,
Thankful was I, and eternally kind,
Her presence kept me from feeling alone,
But deep inside, there was a monster unknown.
I may follow her commands, her perfect soul,
Together with me; she makes me whole,
'Till she cried, tears poured from her eyes,
I'm not worth her love, I now realise.

Constantly fighting an infinite battle,
Her voice against mine- I'm trying to win,
She weakens me though, stealing my sleep,
Sending me dreams I can't comfort in.
I didn't want this, never, I was so broken
To let you in, even after you'd spoken
About the beauty I never even had,
I boiled with jealousy; my heart turned sad.

I'm not fragile, I'm not a feather,
I'm just cold, in every weather,
Chasing something I could only mime,
Destroying myself one piece at a time.
I'm done with pain, I'm so ♥♥♥♥ done,
All I feel is dead and ever so numb,
My biggest fear...my biggest fear...
Is something I can't escape from.

And...I know it will never leave me.
It will always cling onto me,
For as long as I live, for as long I'm gone,
I'm trapped here forever; two minds as one.
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