Warning! Graphic Details! ~POEMS~

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Warning! Graphic Details! ~POEMS~

Postby Stroiker » August 20th, 2012, 4:46 pm

Hello there, since I'm new here I might as well entertain y'all with a poem firstly.
[Not recommended for children under the age of zero]

His bones are cracked, the pressure uproars,
Arms broken, blood spewing, "Please! No more..."
It stops, the pain doesn't though.
"You must suffer, before I let you go"
Nick's hands give up, but there's nowhere to slide them.
RĂ cher sneaks in some spiders with poisonous venom.
Bite, crack, inject, cry.
Tonight is the night, that Nick should die.

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~WIP, so critique all you want, I still need to think of a suitable ending~
Stroiker
Guardian to Glitch Castle

 
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