Silent night

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Silent night

Postby lordpat » September 2nd, 2012, 3:28 pm

Silence. My glass of wine. Silence. Violetta enters in my room. Silence. She sits on her chair. Silence. She started to move her mouth. Silence. She stopped. Silence. She started to move her mouth in a much more exagerated way. Silence. My glass of wine again. Silence. Her face turned all red, she seems very angry. Silence. She starts to move her mouth again. I could read her lips, the words I could read: "wrong", "you", "idiot", "speak", in all silence. My glass of wine. I notice it is empty. I stand up. Silence. I pass next to Violetta. Silence. I went to the kitchen. Lulu is there. The silence breaks.
-I am sorry, I tried to but...
-Its not your fault. I just wanted to tell you, regardless of what happens I will always love you.
-I will love you too.
Violetta opens the door of the kitchen. Silence. She moves her mouth again, very violently. Silence. Lulu is very scared.
-Please! It wasn't his fault- she says -he is a very good man. I was the one that tempted him.
Violetta answers back, stil very angrily. I can read the words "b*tch", "idiot, "speaking". She was furious, indeed. But still, not a single noise comes from her mouth. Silence
-But, but....that's impossible....he's not like that.
Silence. Violetta looks at me. Silence. She starts to modulate again, I can read the words "kill" and "you". It is a short phrase. Silence. She pulls out her gun in complete silence, and shoots me.
I lie on the floor. Lulu comes at me.
-And after all, she was right. You don't care about the ones that care about you.
Both women leave, and the silence becomes eternal.
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