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Blossom

Postby -BY » February 20th, 2013, 7:24 am

Blossom
Nothing hidden here. Nope. :3

I dare to say, everyone out there has points where everything looks quite the same at any time, if it's using the same way to get home from school, meeting people you care or care not about or just simple things like a tree you are used to see every day at exact this special spot. For me, one of these special things was a simple flower, I saw daily at some place. I didn't know about the importance of this flower until it disappeared one day. My life felt horrible knowing deeply about the flower fading if not disappearing forever, people thought I'm crazy cause it's ''just'' a flower. But in these days it turned out this flower was more than ''just'' a flower for me.

Due a special someone helping me at that time. The flower got back where I've normally been seeing it before.

So the time passed, everything seemed to get smoothly again until I felt like seeing this flower more often and wanting to care about it way more than I've ever did before. Unfortunately I should learn soon, that the flower was a special spot in several peoples life.

Due delicious food, rainbows, flying cows and all the other magic stuff I'm seeing this flower every day and trying my best to be a good gardener until today.

As much as I spent my time with this flower, I never got to see it blooming. It bothered me a lot in the beginning, in fact enough to nearly lose all hope in seeing it's blossoms one day.

Due loads of conversations about this single flower, it turned out, that this flower blossoms only one single day in summer. And gosh I'm totally looking forward to this day.
Also dreaming a lot about the true beauty of this flower I may see one day not too far in the future. : )
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Big thank you to FrozenFire who created this masterpiece. : )
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Re: Blossom

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » February 20th, 2013, 10:57 am

Wow, I mean, I know it's got quite an informal tone to it (which IMO think works well here), but I actually really like this. Not to mention the fact that you beat me to writing a story with looooads of references :3

You know it feels a bit more like a diary entry or a personal note than an actual story, which is nice- you don't get many styles like that. Good work. ;)
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