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Haiku Thread

Postby 0CrystalCoin0 » January 11th, 2015, 11:13 pm

If you don't know what a haiku is, google it allow me to explain.

A haiku is a form of Japanese poetry that consists of three lines for each poem. Traditionally they describe nature and philosophy found in it, but not always.

The first line consists of 5 syllables, the second line consists of 7 syllables, and the last line consists of 5 syllables.

As an example:

One leaf falling down

As winter approaches so,

We then worship flames


I think making a thread would help innovate creativity instead of having everyone make their own haiku threads. Plus, it could help us pull each other closer in as a community, yes?

I'll start off mine.

Circus balloons float

Elephants will circle round

Clowns make the kids laugh
Stay positive
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Re: Haiku Thread

Postby *Emelia K. Fletcher » January 12th, 2015, 12:17 pm

You are describing
English haikus, for Christ's sakes
This is Japanese


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Re: Haiku Thread

Postby Supershroom » January 12th, 2015, 12:20 pm

I've heard about a competition of computer error messages in Haiku form. Very funny indeed!

https://www.gnu.org/fun/jokes/error-haiku.html
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Re: Haiku Thread

Postby 1018peter » January 22nd, 2015, 5:04 am

How long will this last?

Perhaps,it will soon be dead

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