A Forgotten Memory's Curse

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A Forgotten Memory's Curse

Postby Magnen » September 21st, 2016, 10:37 pm

I grimaced at the bars to my left. I needed to get out.

It couldn't have been more than a few days since arriving at the Forester colony, and I had already found myself locked up again.

At least this time, I knew why.


O-kay before anybody reads any of this, allow me to quickly reiterate something: This is a sequel! That means if you haven't read the original (or the more likely case, it's been a long time) you should read this first!

Like usual, all feedback is appreciated (just be specific on what you like/dislike) and use spoiler tags when appropriate.

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Re: A Forgotten Memory's Curse

Postby Zunar » September 22nd, 2016, 4:33 am

I already told you my thoughts when I proofread the story for you, but I'll re-iterate them here.

This was really good! You built on the previous story quite well, and I liked how you connected previous events to the past. And the ending... loved it.

Can't wait to see what you write next. :)
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