Sonicfan253's Poetry

[Sonicfan253]

Like TBG, I have started making poems. Here is my first one to show: (NOTE: these are all free verse poems)

~All Mixed Up~

Which way is wrong?
Which way is right?
Am I in a fight?
Id hate to boast
But im scrambled
Almost...



Its sorta short, hope you like it.

[Avo]

Hmm, that was moving, and deep. Great job! Hope to see more!

[Sonicfan253]

Its really easy to make these poems, but I try to put a little bit of feeling into them, yet not alot of it.

~Fire~

The sizzling
The cracking
Its all taking a smacking
On your life.
The fire is blazing
The flames are hazing.
Wood and crapet burning
While a young child is learning
Dont mess with fire.

[Avo]

Nice. Don't forget that there are other types of poems, like Onamotapea or whatever the fell it's called.......you should try different types.

[Sonicfan253]

I like using free verse, because

A. it doesnt have to rhyme

B. I can make any kind of poem I want

C. Well I dunno about C....

Anyway, New poem:

~Pokemon~

Gotta catch em` all
Gotta catch em` all!
Pokemon!
Small pichu mixed with sparking raichu
Pokemon!
Chardizard and larvitar
Pokemon!
Diglett and Celebi
Gotta catch em` all!

Well that was kind of dumb. Another poem:

Cartoon

As a cartoon I can fly
And when I sneeze I shoot up 10 feet high!
Giant hammers and atomic bombs
How about a pencil tomb?
Or a glowing blade
Maybe an eraser Jade!
This is cartoon life.

[Avo]

The cartoon one was good but one thing, bomb doesn't rhyme with tomb (Bomb) (Toomb)

Other than that, good!

[Sonicfan253]

April

Spring showers
Bring april flowers
You can see mother nature's powers.
Red blooming flowers
And dandylions growing by the hours.