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My Poems

Postby Aelita_333 » November 9th, 2010, 5:44 am

The Shadow

In the corn fields,
Where harvest is done,
The shadow stands,
The shadow stands alone.

In the down town streets,
Where dogs eat their dust,
The shadow lives,
The shadow lives to die,

In the courts,
Where justice is done,
The shadow burns,
The shadow hangs is dead,

The shadow dies,
The shadow is no more,
More shadows stand,
More shadows stand alone.

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Re: My Poems

Postby StarF » November 12th, 2010, 9:19 am

[Non poetic me] I'm pretty sure that was good. Shadows now adays are always used in poems. [/Non poetic me]
I'm Pretty sure I should put something here...
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Re: My Poems

Postby JacktheOrk » November 12th, 2010, 12:34 pm

I've posted now giveth me my cookie! Joking, i really like your poetry style, can i join in writing poems in here aswell
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Re: My Poems

Postby Aelita_333 » November 15th, 2010, 5:01 am

Koigokoro Aijou

Her shining hair,
Waving Brightly across my face,
The soft feling,
like the wormest love,

PS Jack make your own
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Re: My Poems

Postby JacktheOrk » November 15th, 2010, 10:49 am

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Re: My Poems

Postby Blablob » November 15th, 2010, 12:51 pm

Aelita_333 wrote:PS Jack make your own

Users can make their own topics for their own poems.
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Re: My Poems

Postby Aelita_333 » November 16th, 2010, 1:10 am

That's what I said.
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Re: My Poems

Postby JacktheOrk » November 16th, 2010, 1:18 am

I thought he was talking about my cookie :(
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Re: My Poems

Postby Aelita_333 » November 16th, 2010, 1:26 am

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