The Adventures of Koopa the Knight

[mariocreater547]

Once a upon a time, there was a koopa whose parents had passed 10 years ago. The koopa`s name was Tenkis. Tenkis loved nature, but then one day the evil hearted king, Redlink, ruler of RedLink land had took the five stones of RedLink land. As a meteor landed in front of Tenkis he saw a sword. He took the sword out of the meteor. The sword gave Tenkis special powers. Then Redlink found out about the sword and ordered his guards to take the sword from Teniks.When the fight happened the sword made a tornado so huge that it got all of the guards. Someone appeared in a weird looking outfit,then he said can I help. Teniks said sure.Then the heros continued their quest. The next story will come out in 3 months. Hope you liked it!!

[Blablob]

This seems to lack any effort whatsoever, and I could tell that from first glance. Looking closer at it, you prove my case. There is no development in your story whatsoever. The plot is minimal and unoriginal, and the characters are bland. Also,

The next story will come out in 3 months

You can't be serious with this. There are so many things wrong with this one statement that I can't describe.

I could have written this in about 2 minutes. Maybe less. Put more effort into your stories, because right now you have a lot to learn.