Alrighht, I'm gonna take your advice, and tackle your levels a step at a time
Levels 1-4 + Boss Fight 1
Now this is organized very nicely into 4 levels and a boss fight, makes it much easier for me to review.
Peach's Castle
The Castle design is phenomenal, and the thing is you didn't just make the castle, you added the east and west wings to make a garden such scenery. I love your scenery, and I love the entire thing itself.
9/10
Really, I do not have anything bad to say but one thing, this level was interesting and fun-made, but it became slightly boring a bit fast. But this is amazing,
Good job!
Mushroom Road
Whew... Terrifyingly amazing, this level is completely solidly made from head to toe, this is the peak of level designing. It shows the Toad's town excellently, and then adds a few items to show that all is not well, that the Goomba's and Bullies had struck.
8/10
Ok, there are only two things i had a problem with. The FLUDD should have been knocked out, for there were only few parts where it was actually needed. Also, the Goomba's fortress can be skipped (By help of the FLUDD.) It was interesting to go through, but then I saw there was no point in it and im like WHAT?! lol, jk jk, hmm... The flying piece was interesting, but... I dont see how it relates really....
Snowy Mountain
Scenery = great. Penguin village = Great, a little odd lol, Bob-omb Fortress = Oddly familiar. This level was amazingly made, I can see now why these levels are together, their level designing is similar, not exact, or close, but you can get the feel that you have played this before.
8/10
There are few who can use FLUDDs without completely butchering the point of them. You are one of them.
Normally I would cut down points for the addition of rocket FLUDD, but i didn't, because unlike many others, you used it amazingly correct. The Turbo FLUDD did knock down a point though, since there is no real point in it since its optional.
Shy Guy's Desert
Flawless, perfectly made, I have nothing to say about this stage. FLUDDs were used to perfection. There was a certain order you had to do the stage in. The pyramid was amazingly constructed. The scenery was amazing. The difficulty was simple, but still enough to make it not boring. I have to say... This is the greatest stage I have ever played.
10/10
Congrats for getting my first 10/10
King Bully's Ancient Tomb
Now I understand that there was much limiting you in terms of bosses, so I was surprised when this actually felt like a boss! Now the stage itself was quite simple, yet it was ingeniously crafted to have the feel of an ancient Tomb Boss fight.
9/10
While the stage is amazing, I see one thing wrong, and it's technically nothing bad, but it makes the "boss" fight even easier. The fact there there were lands on the side made people able to hide in a corner and watch the bully burn.
Whew! This review took about the same amount of time it took to do the stages! It was hard finding the right words for these stages. But I still got 16 more to play. Hopefully I'll get to them this weekend.
But for now thats it!
