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Re: Red's Vault of Wonderful Stories OF DOOM

Postby nin10mode » April 22nd, 2011, 5:40 pm

Jello's Story(s) are the only one's I've read so far. All of them made me lol.
Something tells me Battle of the Year will make me rofl.

If this was a professional story it would get a 6/10 for grammar and spelling mistakes.
But this is for lolz so 13/10. :3
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Re: Red's Vault of Wonderful Stories OF DOOM

Postby RedLink » April 22nd, 2011, 6:03 pm

Reason for grammar mistakes is because I write them in my mind and then post in the topic. So yeah whatever for grammar :D It is about the content.
Anyways Jello's Story is about death, murder, blood, gore, action. THAT makes you laugh?! 0.o Ninny wow
I think battle of the year shall make you laugh :3
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Re: Red's Vault of Wonderful Stories OF DOOM

Postby Venexis » April 25th, 2011, 5:40 pm

Ok, so I promised (days ago, now) that I'd give you a review. And just today, I promised that I'd review so hard, you wouldn't even know what happened. Well, to me at least, that sounds kinda creepy.

Nevertheless, I will give you a review. Just not a hard one.

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But seriously, I can't remember having laughed so hard at any stories I've ever seen on the internet. Or, for that matter, squinted. A few more spaces would help, especially for a sleep deprived mind. Really though, I don't know how you write these, but whatever you're doing is working. Very entertaining, especially the more recent ones (Jar of Evil comes to mind)... looking forward to VG Madness. :awe:

So... yeah. I'm going to leave you an :awe: /10, because no number can ever describe stories this laugh-worthy.
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Re: Red's Vault of Wonderful Stories OF DOOM

Postby RedLink » April 25th, 2011, 5:59 pm

Thank You Venexis for you Hard Review!
:P I just come up with these stories in my mind and post them :P I think its a gift. Some call it random I call it life juice :P
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Re: Red's Vault of Wonderful Stories OF DOOM

Postby sirknightingfail » April 27th, 2011, 7:29 pm

Well one thing I can tell you is your life juice is very juicy. I like the way you write, just edit it and revise it a bit, OK pleas ( insert aborable smilie here)
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Re: Red's Vault of Wonderful Stories OF DOOM

Postby *Emelia K. Fletcher » April 28th, 2011, 2:35 am

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Re: Red's Vault of Wonderful Stories OF DOOM

Postby RedLink » April 28th, 2011, 12:50 pm

Thank You guys for your thoughts on my stories :P
Anyways Vg Madness is about to be posted soon *Weeee*
So Yeah :P Thank You and Stuff. Good Night.....Milk :P
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Re: Red's Vault of Wonderful Stories OF DOOM

Postby *Emelia K. Fletcher » May 16th, 2011, 5:24 am

Aaand having read all of them, I must say that BUFF'S CHICKEN ADVENTURE is my favorite, with Battle Of The Year in second. So lolz.


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Re: Red's Vault of Wonderful Stories OF DOOM

Postby Mr_SaxMan » May 31st, 2011, 6:26 am

Thank you Red for giving me inspiration for my own story topic. :p
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Re: Red's Vault of Wonderful Stories OF DOOM

Postby RedLink » May 31st, 2011, 1:19 pm

Well thank you for thanking me for giving you inspiration :D
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