Alex30149's levels

[Alex30149]

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[Mr_SaxMan]

Hey, nice level, but remember to use the [code] BBCode, thanks!

This has been a message from your friendly neighborhood sax addict.

[~MP3 Amplifier~]

I've decided to review your level.

GOOD POINTS:

+ It's quite fun to explore for the shine sprite.
+ The mystery of it's quite interesting and makes you want to search around for the red coins more.

BAD POINTS:

- You have too many cut-offs, it doesn't look neat.
- The logs at the beginning aren't displayed very well.
- The idea isn't very original, after all, this is what happened in the proper SM63.
- You need to be Luigi to be able to triple jump to one of the ledges.
- Make the invisibility last for shorter, so it's harder.

IMPROVEMENT POINTS:

= Be neat with tiles and items.
= Warn us if we need to use Luigi at any point in the game.

Overall, I think I achieved... 6/20

Maybe try editing it?

[Republic]

@ Koolkid: Try not to say something too directly, you'll not say people who can't see thing as "YO BLIND GET THE FRAKIN OUT" but we'll say that guy is disabled.
Similarly we'll not call them master crappy, but we'll say they "need some work" or "not approachable". Try to be more polite.

FUN: 1.5/10
I can say it is fun if I cover my heart, sorry. 0.5 for effort. The story is not sensible, but it is okay for some not creative story like something what BOWSER capture what again. But the platforming is really not approachable, well, you put too many irregular triangles. I can do it in one minute, right? I apologize if I say too harsh or too directly. However, the platforming is quite originally ...... horrible. In another words I can say it is "creative" than most level. But it is...... Sorry, sorry, I can't find another word to describe it. Well, the good thing here is the red coin challenge, it is quite fun to do exploration on your level around, the level is quite maze-like. Mmm, not really bad, but need more practice, I guess you can make better level next time. However, the cage challenge on the top of the level is nice-done, there is no exploits and it is really fun to avoid some invisible star. Although it is not original. (MP3: Yo can use Mario to finish it, but it is a bit hard---wait some time at the cage area.)


GRAPHICS: 1.5/5

Mmmm, some tile is good. Yes, the tile on the front and at the back is quite good, there is no cut-off, but the tile in the middle area of the tile really need some work. They are floating around with some unfinished edge and lots of inappropriate coins. Remember to put some coins regularly and some decoration as well.

OTHER: 3/5
Mmmmm....Since you're a newbie, it is a quite good level. There is nothingspecial-> Nothing bad as hell, nothing good.

OVERALL: 6/20
-Lazy as will replaced-

BUFF EDIT: The review he is referencing has been deleted due to poor quality of writing and harshness.
REP EDIT: Thankyou, now I am going to complete my review. I guess you're too busy and make some typo.

[Zacky]

This post by Zacky was thumbed up by: 2

Harmless (August 4th, 2011, 10:45 am) • Republic (July 27th, 2011, 8:34 pm)

[~MP3 Amplifier~]

Lol Republic, you have to tell people SOME of the good points of their level..

[Harmless]

Yo koolkid! Why are you the one telling people how bad their levels are? Look at your own first.
Then learn how to make a proper review.

^ This guy is making sense here. Also, koolkid, please learn to stop being an ego-maniac.