Danger Pyramid Pt.1

[GMDragon11]

Danger Prymaid Part 1
Inside the pyramid,there is a path that leads to a shine.

BUFFEDIT: Part 2 moved to separate topic
GMEDIT: Level is longer.
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[aary33]

Part 1 and Part 2 dont seem to go together cause when part 1 ends, it ends outside the pyramid, when part 2 starts it starts inside the pyramid.

[GMDragon11]

The only reason because there was a trapdoor that lead them to the exit. But I didn't want to make it like a story so I didn't tell you people.

[Asterocrat]

Right.

Danger Pyramid by gmdragon11

4.25/5 Rank: A+

Rating details:

--- Fun: 2.75/3
That was a fun level! Not too easy or too hard, not too short not too long. It is really balanced. Good. But though, if you need chalenge, you can always try to get the 1-up mushrooms (I got them all) and that was really good. A fun level.
--- Graphics: 0.75/1
Less good, but you made the effort to add trees, coins and 1-ups (and believe me, not everyone do that) and I appreciate it. Though, there is some cutoff in the Part 2, but it's still okay.
--- Other: 0.75/1
You used some glitches, for example in the signs, or to make quicksand. Good job.

--- Overall: 4.25/5 => 4/5 (Impossible to rate a quarter)
Well, that's a good level! You put some effort in it, not like a random level you can see in the old portal. Good job!

--- Advices: Well... I've nothing to say. Oh wait, maybe one thing: the quicksand (or sand holes). I sometimes don't see it. Maybe you can use a different tile or some hint like this to spot easily. That's all

[GMDragon11]

Thanks Star King. . I finally got a review.

[Karyete]

I don't really have time for a review. But I played it, so I gave it 5 stars! You make great levels, dude

[GMDragon11]

Thanks.

[SuperMIC]

Sorry if I offend... but you have DEFINITELY improved from the time you first started LDing. Greatly.

First thing: it's Pyramid, not Prymaid. Good effort in decor, there wasn't REALLY any cut-off, although I think you could've used more slopes. The fun level was good, as Star King said, not too easy, not too hard, and it was an enjoyable play.

3.5/5 -> 4/5

[GMDragon11]

No offence.