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Re: Dark/Light

Postby entertainment.net » July 29th, 2011, 3:32 pm

15:: Manipulative Jerk

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Re: Dark/Light

Postby entertainment.net » August 2nd, 2011, 7:32 pm

16:: Mr. Ambivalence

I use big words to sound smrt.

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Re: Dark/Light

Postby Megar » August 3rd, 2011, 1:57 am

"Wait, I do NOT know enough! Come back! I have more questions!"

xD 9/10
Why 9? I don't know, to be honest. I just don't give 10's. :troll:
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Re: Dark/Light

Postby AlucardX60 » August 3rd, 2011, 9:17 am

Well everything is starting to make a little sense. There are obviously still some things that have gone unasnwered (and thus no new questions) or maybe I'm thinking of another series by a E.net member.

Anyway nothing I can critique at the moment. The graphics are impressive, the humor while lacking recently has the excuse of an "event scene" if you will, and the storyline that I haven't been keeping up with because I was so confused about is starting to shape-up.

All I can say is keep it up and hope to see more humor since I assume story telling time is over.
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Re: Dark/Light

Postby entertainment.net » August 11th, 2011, 11:19 am

17, 18, & 19

3 comics, because from now on if an update is late the penalty is 1 comic per day late.

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Re: Dark/Light

Postby entertainment.net » August 17th, 2011, 12:09 pm

vmk here, filling in for Narf.
Anywho, two new comics today:
20::vs Weapon X
21::BSoD


And seriously, review and comment. It helps Narf remember to make new comics. No joke.

narfedit: Yes, comment! It's been 5 comics with no feedback.
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Re: Dark/Light

Postby *Emelia K. Fletcher » August 19th, 2011, 11:11 am

Feedback.

*weeeeeeeeEEEEEOOOOOOOOOON*

Sorry.

Pretty good stuff, that was.

Also, the error should be like this:

'stop\error at bank 0x00000000
error at bank 0x000--

stop\cannot load error at address 1x00000004'

Meaning it loads the 0x00000000, but cannot load 0x000troll as an error, thus causing an error at 1x00000004: second line, fourth word.

At least, that's what I think it should be.


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Re: Dark/Light

Postby AlucardX60 » August 19th, 2011, 11:46 am

Well the humor is starting to return but still doesn't seem to have as much as a presence as before. Though there it a storyline your keeping up with and that's something I actually haven't seen in a while. (CVNC had a kinda fail story and Thwomps does but it's mostly made for humor)

Though I'm starting to sense that this is meant more for a storyline and only some humor. (Yeah took me till now) In which case your doing a pretty good job but if you want storyline then long battles isn't really where you want to go. While cool I may recommend that you make your battles one or two pages albeit they can be larger if you wish.
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Re: Dark/Light

Postby entertainment.net » August 19th, 2011, 12:07 pm

@MKSTAR26- It's a Windows XP crash, and this is just the line underneath the "TECHNICAL INFORMATION" header. So it's just a bunch of 0x(hex code here) lines :p Or I have no idea what I'm doing when it comes to computers. Either seems viable.

@alucardx60- I'm going to get back to more story soon enough. I just haven't abused photoshop in a while :troll:

With luck, I'll get 22 up on Tuesday instead of being late again. But with my track record, that's unlikely. :awe:

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Re: Dark/Light

Postby *Emelia K. Fletcher » August 20th, 2011, 3:38 am

entertainment.net wrote:@MKSTAR26- It's a Windows XP crash, and this is just the line underneath the "TECHNICAL INFORMATION" header. So it's just a bunch of 0x(hex code here) lines :p Or I have no idea what I'm doing when it comes to computers. Either seems viable.

@alucardx60- I'm going to get back to more story soon enough. I just haven't abused photoshop in a while :troll:

With luck, I'll get 22 up on Tuesday instead of being late again. But with my track record, that's unlikely. :awe:

/narfnin

Hex code only contains A, B, C, D, E and F. The word 'TROLL' doesn't contain any of them.

Pwn'd.


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