Lrmaster's Games (Gold Town RPG released!)

[spookyghost]

Welcome to my games topic! I made all these games with GameMaker for Mac.
I do not have the full version of it now, so I cannot release any of these games yet.


~GOLD TOWN RPG~
Story:
You have traveled west to the town of New Delond. Mine and explore caves to find the mother load!

Programming log:
I made a new RPG game called gold town. It isn't made in flash but there is no other section for posting our games... sooooo....

It's kindave bland so people who are good artists I need your help drawing pictures, because the ones I make a crappy.
SO HERE ARE SOME SCREENSHOTS:



EDIT: Fixed some grammatical errors, thanks to Aznchua4ever!
http://www.mediafire.com/?tyxzywuthhd
~Mystery RPG~
Given up until I learn more of the code for the game...
You wake up on a strange island.... Try and find your way out!


That all the games I am working on right now!

[Canine]

Freakin' awesome!! I can't wait!!

[Chaukai]

A few grammar mistakes. It looks fine though.

[spookyghost]

Like where AZN?

[Chaukai]

"Welcome to town sqaure."

It should be, "Welcome to town square." or to go even further, I suppose it should be, "Welcome to Town Square." That part is optional I suppose.


Pickaxe = $20
A necessity for miners don't leave home without it!

It should be, "A necessity for miners; don't leave home without it!" Or some kind of punctuation. >.>

You climb up to the mountains... I guy is standing there.

Should be "A guy is standing there."

BUT ITS WORTH IT!

Should be, "BUT IT'S WORTH IT!"

It's only minor things. x.x But things none the less.

[spookyghost]

Okay thanks!

[Mario Levels]

This is going Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[spookyghost]

I need help, where do I upload the file for people to download?!

[TrappedTime]

You're going to do great.
You're going to do your best.

[Suyo]

I need help, where do I upload the file for people to download?!

mediafire.com