SMS: The Ruined Temple

[GMDragon11]

Super Mario: Storytime
The Ruined Temple
After Mario got the shine from the secret room, Mr. Cosmo, the librarian of the library, came and was angry! But after Mario told him how he needed to get all the shines to save everyone, he calmed down. After that, he got the Ruined Temple book and transported to the temple! Can Mario get the shine there?

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The first REAL level of my series. I worked hard hard so comment and rate please. If there is a glitch, please tell me because I couldn't test it much. ENJOY!
MUSIC:Donkey Kong Country: Voices of the Temple / Temple Tempest


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Known Bugs:
Strange Layering Bug making strange physics

Wow! What a great temple. The decorated ruined pillars, the epic koopa wall jump, the raging. Oh wait.

This isn't a review but a brief description thingy that affects my rating..

The easy path is TOO EASY (lol kinda makes the challenge feel useless when its not. Its just for challenge. Gotta give you credit for the work inside the path.)

Cultural Lumas (silver star)

Untalkable Locked Luma. Makes it feel like its a trap.

It was worth stopping my level designing just to play this.

[GMDragon11]

Untalkable Locked Luma. Makes it feel like its a trap.

It IS a trap... if you read what the other lumas said.

Anyways, thanks for the review, I'm probably gonna put this on the level series topic today or tomorrow morning.

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Untalkable Locked Luma. Makes it feel like its a trap.

It IS a trap... if you read what the other lumas said.

Anyways, thanks for the review, I'm probably gonna put this on the level series topic today or tomorrow morning.

Wow, I actually missed a luma. i didn't finish the previous level I search for that in this level.

[GMDragon11]

BTW, I posted the series in the Level Series Forum, if you guys wanna play.

[SonicMarioJryGX]

Amazing level! pretty well acclimated, pretty well designed, pretty well overall!
The only flaw maybe could be the background, the fast moving clouds, at certain moments of the level, make the temple to feel like a abandoned airpship, and also that little nugget when you are invisible and jump to go through the cage to get the shine but Mario somehows crashes with the cage (I know is like a small glitch, but having to deal with that is kind of awkward).
Otherwise, is a almost perfect level, it honestly shows that you are a great designer.

(And i need to learn how to make something untouchable )

[GMDragon11]

Thanks for the review, and if you want to make things untouchable, ( is normally called a disabled item ) go to the Tutorial Thread in the Level Designer forum.

[MessengerOfDreams]

This level is rather marvelous. I'll be keeping my eye on you.

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LOL look at the ratings. Somebody raged... it's easier to find out who thanks to the new portal.

Um... Can you update some of the collisions?

[GMDragon11]

Um... Can you update some of the collisions?

What collisions?