XThecommander's Levels

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My levels that i made are posted here

[XThecommander]

The Forest Of Mystery

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The Train One of the first train levels possibly

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[Chaukai]

The Forest of Mystery
Very nice and detailed level! Also, excellently well hidden stars! Good job!
8/10
It seems like you put alot of effort into this, I do have one problem, that is where you placed the first star. Nobody would ever know where the first star is unless they like to just jump around randomly. Even then, once you head into the house you can't go back. One more thing, the place isn't necessarily a forest, since most of the level and stars are inside the house.

The Train
Also excellent detailing! Creative and original!
7/10
Well this is a very nice train, although some parts did not make sense, such as the random pipe that leads you out of the train, and the waterlogged room. lol, and also, it doesn't hurt to space apart the rooms a little, that way you can't see everything at once.

[XThecommander]

The Airship Shipyard one of two levels..

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[Ridder]

Alright, my fust Review of a level, I think.
I only tried one level just now, but bear with me.
The Train:8/10
It was nice, but it doesn't seem to be a good train,Trains are several Carts attached to each other right?Well it looked like it was just ONE big car, you could have spaced out the parts where you wanted to indicate that you were going on to a different cart,and you could have used some level transitions,because it would work.
I liked the little things like blocking us off because we were disturbing passengers and using the steam as platforms, and how good it looked overall.
Spacing,well if you zoom out, you can see the entire level, well almost.

8/10,not bad. Not bad at all,could use a wider variety of Passengers though, and a story as to why we are on the train.

[XThecommander]

The Airship Shipyard Pt2 (Ruins)
mario finds himself in the hangar and finds that hes not in the sky but in the middle of the ocean and looks out to see clouds that are floating in the sky behind him but somethings diffrent but what.... also this will be leading into alot more levels but till then play this(its not exactly beautiful since its supposed to be destroyed...)and its very easy

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[zebtrestalala]

Very nice, I like the ariship levels, ESPECIALLY how you went back and filled in background to show that you were in the airship factory. Too many people don't bother with that and it looks crappy.

Another thing: Spacing properly and capitalization are key to having a level's text look nice. You did very well, but had a few slip-ups. Still, nothing to worry about.

[XThecommander]

My new levels that are not related to the other levels i was making these levels are a series where you are in a mysterious zone called the X-Zone

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