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Re: 7th Level Designer Contest

Postby Suyo » May 17th, 2010, 6:01 am

Actually, I had some critic too, but I forgot to save it. :facepalm:
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Re: 7th Level Designer Contest

Postby MessengerOfDreams » May 17th, 2010, 6:02 am

Judging, while quick, was troublesome, too. What with Suyo's and my computer failing and backup judges having to be hired off the street, :whew: that was hard.
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Re: 7th Level Designer Contest

Postby zebtrestalala » May 17th, 2010, 6:41 am

Aw crap, guys, none of you actually used my checkpoint system? I guess I should have made the pipes come out of the ground, then.

Craaaaap.

Just for future reference, I did put in a Checkpoint system, I just didn't make the pipes obvious. :facepalm:
Signatures are silly little things.

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Re: 7th Level Designer Contest

Postby Volkove » May 17th, 2010, 7:26 am

As much as I hate to likely throw away first place,
Volcove-17.5/20
16/20 from Blab, 17/20 from YB, 18/20 from Suyo

Unless it was calculated in a different way, the average from those three score is 17, not 17.5. As such, I only deserve second place at best. :/


Otherwise, sadness as not seeing SY's commenting. :(


Also, just wondering, but was the 'secret ending' in the first part also rooted out by any of the judges? I didn't see any mentioning of it, so I'm not sure.


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-1 point….the second level is almost a nightmare.

If you don't mind my asking, how so? I purposely toned down the difficulty a fair bit, and the only truly difficult portion would likely be the red coin gathering, which is entirely optional.
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Re: 7th Level Designer Contest

Postby MessengerOfDreams » May 17th, 2010, 7:36 am

Man...

I should know better than to do math at 6:30am.

Gimme a bit to double check.

I SUCK!
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Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: 7th Level Designer Contest

Postby MessengerOfDreams » May 17th, 2010, 8:02 am

Blablob- 17.25/20
YB-16/20, TPG-18.5/20

Volcove-17/20
16/20 from Blab, 17/20 from YB, 18/20 from Suyo

Marioiscool254- 16.75/20
YB-17/20, Me-15/20, Blab-17/20, 18/20 from Suyo

Zebtrestalala-16/20
16/20 from YB, 16/20 from Blab, 14/20 from Buff, 18/20 from Suyo

MessengerOfYahweh-15.5/20
15/20 from YB, 13/20 from Blablob, 17/20 from LRmaster, 17/20 from Suyo

Worst_Master-15.25/20
16/20 from YB, 19/20 from Me.10/20 from Blab, 16/20 from Suyo

Aznchau4ever- 15/20
15/20 from YB, 11/20 from Blab, 17/20 from Suyo 17/20 from Kirby999! (SHOOT ME!)

Yoshi Boo 118-14.75/20
17/20 from TPG, 11/20 from Blab. 16/20 from Suyo

Avolerators- 14.5/20-
15/20 from YB, 11/20 from me, 15/20 from Blab, 17/20 from Suyo

Buffooner- 12.5/20-
13.5/20 from YB, 9/20 from me, 11/20 from Blab, 16/20 from Suyo

Hugemariofan- 11.5/20-
9/20 from YB, 16/20 from me., 8/20 from Blab, 13/20 from Suyo

Nin10mode- 11.25/20
12/20 from YB, 6/20 from me, 12/20 from Blab, 15/20 from Suyo

Cruel Fire- 10.75/20-
13.5/20 from YB, 11/20 from me, 8/20 from Blab, 10/20 from Suyo

Nexgen- 10.5/20
10/20 from YB, 11/20 from Blab

Mushroomario- 10.25/20
13/20 from YB, 6/20 from me, 8/20 from Blab, 14/20 from Suyo

Gamemaster123- 9/20
12/20 from YB, 8/20 from me, 7/20 from Blab

Salmo- 8.75/20
12/20 from YB, 7/20 from me, 6/20 from Blab, 10/20 from Suyo

Python0405- 7.5/20
YB-12/20- Me- 5/20, Blab- 9/20, Suyo-4/20

My Sister- 5/20
5/20 from Blab, 7/20 from YB, 5/20 from LRmaster, 3/20 from Suyo

Andrew&Luigi- 3.25/20
7/20 from YB, 0/20 from me, 4/20 from Blab, 2/20 from Suyo


THERE. Fixed.


Man, I wanted to be, like, the best judge ever. I can't even freaking add!
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I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: 7th Level Designer Contest

Postby Yoshi Boo 118 » May 17th, 2010, 10:41 am

Oh, well. I had a feeling I wouldn't do as well in this contest. But, still can't wait for the next one! :awe:
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Re: 7th Level Designer Contest

Postby Megar » May 17th, 2010, 10:58 am

Yoshi Boo 118 wrote:Oh, well. I had a feeling I wouldn't do as well in this contest. But, still can't wait for the next one! :awe:

Which will hopefully be based on new mechanics.
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Re: 7th Level Designer Contest

Postby nin10mode » May 17th, 2010, 11:04 am

Once again, my score does not live up to my expectations. <_< Oh well. Just more motivation to work harder next contest. And I thought the one pipe worked. :U When I tested it, it worked fine. :/ I guess I had to much ruins, not enough treasure. :D
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Re: 7th Level Designer Contest

Postby Canine » May 17th, 2010, 11:04 am

So....the contest is over? :D
Hi, it's me again. I'm back for good now. No more leaving. Hopefully. :) Anyways, see you around.. :P

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Face it. I don't care most of the time..

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