Luigi's Birthday

[YoshiKid54]

This is a story I made when I was 11.

The story starts with Luigi sleeping.
Luigi: Yes, the time has come. Just 4 hours to go till my favorite day. Calm down Luigi, calm down.
4 hours later… (12.00 am)
Luigi: Yeah, yeah yeah! It’s a blast from the past, the time has come! The time has come!
Birdo woke up surprised.
Birdo: What time Luigi? And what do you mean by ‘it’s a blast from the past’?
Luigi: Huh? Don’t you get it?
Birdo: No…
Luigi: What!? No, no, this is impossible!
Birdo shrugged.
Luigi jumped on Diddy Kong’s bed.
Luigi: Wake up, wake up!
Diddy Kong: What, why? It the middle of the night!
Luigi: Because today is a very special day.
Diddy Kong: What? I don’t get it.
Luigi: (sighs) Oh, please don’t make me do this. (Yells) IT’S MY BIRTHDAY!
Diddy Kong: (yells like Luigi) WE KNOW!
Luigi: (return to normal voice) what? I thought you didn’t know about my birthday.
Diddy Kong: Of course we do Luigi; it’s just too early to talk about it.
Luigi: Can we start the birthday party first thing in the morning?
Diddy Kong: Decision is up to yours.
Luigi: Alright.
Diddy Kong: Now I’m off to sleep.
The next morning, Luigi was excited. He was hoping to have a party, surprises, birthday cake, presents, and some fun games.
Luigi: Wow! Thanks for the party guys!
Koopa Troopa: No problem. (He was the only who wanted to say that.)
Everyone cheered. ‘Hip-hip-hooray’ they would say. Unfortunately, no-one actually knows that Princess Daisy overslept. Neither did Luigi! Eventually she woke up.
Princess Daisy: What’s going on out there? Hmm, must be a crowd.
Luigi approached Daisy.
Luigi: How is it going there, my lover?
Princess Daisy: Everything’s cool.
Luigi: Did you bring me a present?
Princess Daisy: Um, yes. I’ll get it right now.
Immediately, she left, jumped on Yoshi (before nobody could see her) at the end.
Yoshi: Hey! What are you doing?
Princess Daisy: Just get to Coconut Mall. I need to get Luigi a present.
Yoshi: Oh my! You are so cruel to Luigi! You didn’t give him a single present! You didn’t even support his birthday! Right now Luigi is forcing you to do this right?
Princess Daisy: No, I just overslept.
Yoshi: Oh, right.
Princess Daisy and Yoshi arrived at Coconut Mall. There, they found a store called ‘Toadsworth’s Gift Shop.’ They found a rare rainbow cap.
Princess Daisy: I think Luigi will like the Rainbow Cap.
Yoshi: You sure you want to purchase that?
Princess Daisy: Yes, I’m sure.
Yoshi: Okay.
They met Toadsworth, the owner of the shop.
Toadsworth: Hello, may I help you?
Princess Daisy: Yes. We’ll take the rainbow cap please.
Toadsworth: That will be 285 coins please.
Princess Daisy looked around if she had 285 or more coins around her. But she had no coins.
Toadsworth: I’m waiting…
Yoshi: Uh, sorry about that Mr. Toadsworth. My friend Daisy is a little ‘out of shape’ today. Anyway here are your coins.
Toadsworth: Thank you.
Yoshi: You’re lucky I was there for you. Without me you could have been captured by the Isle Delfino Police! Besides, you still owe me 285 coins.
Princess Daisy: Thank you, but I don’t think I can give you that much coins.
Yoshi: (sighs) don’t mention it.
Toadsworth gave the rainbow cap to the two customers. But before they could snag it…
Princess Daisy: Oops, I really got to go to the toilet!
Yoshi: Just wait Daisy.
Princess Daisy: No really, I can’t hold it much longer!
Yoshi: Oh, dear.
Yoshi: Excuse us Mr. Toadsworth, but my friend really needs to go the toilet. Could you please wait for a moment?
Toadsworth: I sure can.
Yoshi: Thank you Mr. Toadsworth. We’ll be right back.
Yoshi and Princess Daisy arrived at the toilets just before Princess Daisy made a fart.
Yoshi: Alright Daisy, you got 1 minute to get in and get out!
Princess Daisy: What!? I’ll never make it out in 1 minute!
Yoshi: Alright then, 3 minutes.
Princess Daisy: 5 minutes.
Yoshi: Fine.
10 minutes later, (which Yoshi expected to be 5 minutes) Princess Daisy returned. Yoshi was outraged.
Yoshi: Hey! We made a deal! You’re supposed to come out in 5 minutes. But no! You didn’t listen to me didn’t you? Instead you came out of the toilet room in 10 minutes! 10 minutes I tell you, 10 minutes! Boy you get me angry!
Princess Daisy shrugged then said:
Princess Daisy: But we all know Yoshi is a friendly dinosaur.
Yoshi calmed down a little.
Yoshi: (sighs) you’re right Daisy. What was I thinking? I’m sorry I treated that way to you Daisy, I’m sorry. (Cries)
Princess Daisy: Oh, it’s okay Yoshi. It’s okay.
Yoshi: Aha! I was only joking! We all know Yoshis never cry!
Princess Daisy: Does that mean you are still angry at me?
Yoshi: Yep. Now hurry up, we can’t afford to lose time!
They arrived back at the store.
Yoshi: So Mr. Toads worth, where’s the item?
Toadsworth: (talking at a very slow speed) I’m afraid…
Yoshi: Yes, keep going…
Toadsworth: (talking at a very slow speed) I’m afraid, that somebody took your rainbow cap.
Yoshi: What!? Who?
Toadsworth: (talking at a very slow speed) some guy named ‘King Koopa Bowser’.
Yoshi and Princess Daisy: That Bowser, always cutting costs!
Yoshi: No need to give us more information Mr. Toadsworth. We know where he lives and we will kick his butt as long as we can until he gives back that rainbow cap! Let’s go Princess Daisy!
Toadsworth: Good luck!
Yoshi and Princess Daisy left the store and Coconut Mall.
Princess Daisy: You know where to go Yoshi?
Yoshi: Of course I know where to go Princess Daisy. It’s just right…
Yoshi and Princess Daisy stumbled upon a huge building. Around the building is lava. The building also has spikes. Guarding it right now is a huge wooden door. It was scary. In fact, it was so scary that Princess Daisy wanted to go back!
Yoshi: That is definitely Bowser’s Castle.
He sees Princess Daisy running away.
Yoshi: Hey Daisy! Come back here!
Princess Daisy: Never!
Yoshi: Oh, sure thing. Not listening to a companion like me.
Yoshi: Listen Daisy, if you want to retrieve the item we just bought, then you just got to work with me. Okay?
Princess Daisy: No! I just can’t!
Yoshi: Daisy, right now is a very epic situation. If you don’t retrieve that item back, Luigi’s birthday will be history! You must overcome your fear! This leaves me a very important question to ask Princess Daisy. Are you with me?
Princess Daisy paused for a moment, and then said:
Princess Daisy: You’re right Yoshi! I must overcome my fear! I must get that rainbow cap back! I must save Luigi’s birthday!
Yoshi: Thank you for being brave Princess Daisy. Now I need a cookie.
Princess Daisy: What!? This is no time to eat Yoshi!
Yoshi: Just give me a cookie!
Princess Daisy grabbed a cookie, which was lying on the ground. She picked it up and gave it to Yoshi.
Princess Daisy: Here’s the cookie Yoshi. (Gives cookie to Yoshi)
Yoshi: (eats cookie) Hmm! Yum, yum!
After Yoshi ate the cookie, he laid an egg.
Princess Daisy: Uh, Yoshi?
Yoshi: Yes?
Princess Daisy: What’s inside that egg?
Yoshi: A time bomb.
Princess Daisy: Wha-wha-what? Are you using that time bomb for suicide because you can’t get into that castle?
Yoshi: What? No. What I‘m really doing with this time bomb is for an idea. Hmm… what can I do with this time bomb?
10 seconds later…
Princess Daisy: Hurry up, it’s going to blow!
Yoshi: What? Oh.
Yoshi did a Flutter Jump across the castle and attached the time bomb on the large wooden castle door. He then returned to Princess Daisy.
Yoshi: Impact in 5, 4, 3, 2, 1…
The time bomb exploded. Immediately, the castle door broke down, allowing Princess Daisy and Yoshi to enter the castle.
When they arrived at the castle…
Princess Daisy: It looks spooky here. Maybe we should get out of here.
Yoshi: Remember what I said Daisy. Be brave.
They came across a haunted room full of spider webs. Will Yoshi and Princess Daisy make across this haunted room? The key to this is courage.
Princess Daisy: Wow! Look at this abyss. It’s pretty bottomless. I bet you that there are full of dead Koopas on that pit.
Yoshi: Yeah, you’re right. There could be…
Princess Daisy: (screams) A Boo is after us!
Yoshi: What? Where?
Princess Daisy pointed the location of the Boo. Yoshi was surprised.
Yoshi: A Boo? Let’s fight it!
Yoshi started the attack by doing a Kick Jump. But there was no effect. Instead, the Boo just attacked him back.
Yoshi: Oh I forgot; the boos are immune to my attacks. Ouch.
Princess Daisy: Now it’s my turn!
Instead of attacking, she found a red Koopa shell. She threw the shell at the Boo. Eventually by doing this strategic attack three times, it was defeated.
After Yoshi was stunned for a while, he got up and said:
Yoshi: Wow! I never knew that you can fight better than me!
Princess Daisy: Well now you know.
They came across a wall.
Yoshi: Looks like were trapped. Hmm… maybe we should go down this abyss.
Princess Daisy: We can’t go down there! The pit might be bottomless!
Yoshi: Uh Daisy, what other choice do we have? We can’t go forward because there’s a wall blocking us, and we can’t go back because the door I wrecked is blocking the entrance of the castle! This is the only route!
Princess: Well, that’s true. Let’s go down there. Like you said:
Yoshi and Princess Daisy: Always be brave.
They both jumped in the abyss, which was pretty scary. They both screamed. Luckily, Princess Daisy was wrong. The abyss that they jumped into wasn’t bottomless after all. They landed on a hard ground.
Yoshi: What’s this thing in my nose? (Sneezes)
Princess Daisy: Must be sand. The next section is full of quicksand.
Yoshi: You mean if we’re not careful, we could sink?
Princess Daisy: Uh huh.
Yoshi: (gulps) Bowser’s castle is much scarier than I thought.
Yoshi: (gulps) alright, let’s go.
Daisy started by jumping across the quicksand. Same with Yoshi but he did a Flutter Jump instead.
Yoshi: Are you alright there Princess Daisy?
Princess Daisy: Yeah, I’m fine.
They were lucky enough to make it halfway. But…
Princess Daisy: Yoshi! Help! Help!
Yoshi: Oh no, Princess Daisy is in trouble!
Yoshi was looking for Princess Daisy, but he couldn’t find her.
Yoshi: Oh no she’s going to die!
Yoshi: (finds Princess Daisy raising her hand) There she is!
Quickly, Yoshi grabbed Princess Daisy’s hand.
Yoshi: Harder, harder.
He pulled it as hard as he can. He was able to save Princess Daisy before she sank into the deadly quicksand.
Yoshi: Princess Daisy, you’re alive!
Princess Daisy: I know I’m alive! (Kisses Yoshi on the cheeks)
Yoshi: (blushes) She, she, she kissed me!
Princess Daisy and Yoshi successfully made it through the quicksand. There was another door, which leads them to another passageway.
Yoshi: It’s a little to dark in here. There’s must be a light switch somewhere around here.
Yoshi finds the light switch and switches it on. There, they find Bowser Jr holding a golden key.
Bowser Jr: (laughs) Ha, ha! This key that I’m holding leads to the great and powerful King Bowser!
Princess Daisy: Give us that key! Bowser has stolen an item from us!
Bowser Jr: Oh he did, did he? Well you got to take me out first! You’ll never defeat me and my dad!
Yoshi: Oh yes we will!
The fight began. Yoshi was fighting against Bowser Jr, while Princess Daisy was staring at some weird object.
Princess Daisy: What is thing I am looking at? This is weird. Notice that Princess Daisy isn’t helping Yoshi defeat Bowser Jr.
Yoshi: I need some help around here!
Yoshi: That means you, Princess Daisy.
No reply.
Finally Yoshi spoke with one huge growl.
Yoshi: (growls) PRINCESS DAISY! DON’T JUST STAND AROUND, HELP ME!
Princess Daisy: Just a minute, Yoshi.
Yoshi: (growls) NOW IS NOT THE TIME TO LOOK AT OBJECTS DAISY. NOW IS THE TIME TO HELP ME. HURRY UP AND GET HERE RIGHT NOW!
Ignoring Yoshi’s orders Princess Daisy was thinking…
Princess Daisy: Hmm… I wonder what will happen if I bump this object.
Princess Daisy hit the object with her head. A star came out. Yes, the object Princess Daisy was wondering was a? Block. She grabbed the star.
Yoshi: (growls) PRINCESS DAISY! I’M GOING TO KILL YOU!
Princess Daisy: Yes, I’m invincible!
Within that, Princess Daisy attempts to attack Bowser Jr. She runs into him at full speed. She did a ground pound.
Princess Daisy: Take this!
Bowser Jr: Ow.
Princess Daisy: Take that!
Bowser Jr: Ouch!
Princess Daisy: And take these!
Bowser Jr: (cries) Alright, alright I quit! Here’s the golden key!
Princess Daisy: Thanks. It’s a pleasure to fight with you.
Princess Daisy snatched the key from Bowser Jr and unlocked the door. She and Yoshi went inside.
Yoshi: You may be dumb Princess Daisy, but you are incredibly curious.
Bowser Jr: My dad is so going to crush me.
Once inside the room…
Princess Daisy: (sniffs) I smell barbeque. A huge one. It’s not like a spark. It’s a big, burning flame! (Sniffs) Hey, there is something burning.
Yoshi: Yes, because you’re…
Somebody turned on the switch. They looked down.
Yoshi: (yells) …STANDING ON LAVA!
Princess Daisy: What?
She looks down.
Princess Daisy: Ouch! Hot, hot, hot!
She quickly gets back on ground.
They soon found Bowser, who was guarding the rainbow cap.
Yoshi: Hey Bowser, give us that rainbow cap or else we’ll kick your butt!
Bowser: Hmm… very tempting. But no. I rather steal your rainbow cap. It looks so pretty!
Yoshi: Well Bowser, don’t say I didn’t warn you. Get him Princess Daisy!
But before Princess Daisy could attack Bowser…
Bowser: Kamek get down here!
Kamek: Yes sir.
As you should know, Kamek protects Bowser much like Toad protecting Princess Peach. Anyway, back to the story.
Kamek used his magical power to turn Bowser into ‘mega Bowser’. He was one hundred times bigger than Yoshi and Princess Daisy! Princess Daisy stepped back.
Bowser: Ha ha! Nobody can crush me now!
Yoshi: Wow, this looks bad. But that doesn’t mean that it’s impossible to attack Bowser!
Yoshi tried to attack Bowser by doing a double Flutter Jump. But because of Bowser’s size and strength he was able to squish Yoshi, which he did.
Yoshi: Looks like I was wrong after all.
Princess Daisy: Let’s see if you can defeat me!
Princess Daisy did a slide at full speed. But Bowser was too heavy. Daisy’s slide stopped as soon as she touched Bowser. Within that, Bowser kicked Princess Daisy off.
Princess Daisy: No!
Bowser: Ha ha! I am invincible. You fight worse than Mario! You two can’t stop me!
Yoshi: Oh yes we can!
With one amazing push, Yoshi was able to escape from Bowser’s foot.
Yoshi: Ha, ha! Who’s talking now?
Yoshi had an idea. He starts to do a rap dance. He did some very cool moves. Even Bowser was astonished.
Yoshi: This dance ain’t completed yet because what you’re about to see is some cool pro moves.
Bowser: Huh?
Yoshi: Daisy?
Princess Daisy: Yeah?
Yoshi: You want to be a rap singer?
Princess Daisy: Yeah.
Yoshi: Well here’s your chance!
Princess Daisy: Alright!
Princess Daisy: (raps) Oh yeah, because it’s time to rap Bowser, it’s time to rap. Here we go!
Bowser: Wow! They’re really good.
Bowser approached Yoshi and Daisy.
Bowser: Sign my autograph please.
But instead of signing the autograph, Yoshi and Princess Daisy attacked Bowser.
Bowser: Ouch my nose!
Bowser returns to his normal size.
Bowser: How dare you, I’m going to…
Yoshi: Having fun there Bowser?
This distracts Bowser from attacking Yoshi and Princess Daisy.
Bowser: Yeah, I’m having fun! (Dances to the beat)
They attacked him again.
Bowser: Hey who punched me? Hey guys, can you tell me who attacked me?
Yoshi: Can I tell you a secret?
Bowser: Of course you can!
Yoshi: The secret is; it’s actually Kamek who attacked you.
Princess Daisy: Yeah, he really hates you.
Bowser: Oh really? Well I’m going to give that Magikoopa a piece of my mind!
Princess Daisy and Yoshi can hear Bowser and Kamek fighting. Quickly, they snuck in and quietly snagged the rainbow cap. Unfortunately…
Bowser: That Kamek should be sorry.
He sees Princess Daisy and Yoshi taking the Rainbow Cap.
Bowser: What are you doing? Ah, you were trying to steal my rainbow cap! Well, it’s mine!
Princess Daisy: No it’s not!
Bowser: Alright… KAMEK!
Kamek: No! I am not going down!
Bowser: Oh why did I have to fight him?
Bowser: Alright guys, you will have to go against me then.
Amazingly, Princess Daisy found a Mega Mushroom. She ate it and turned into a colossal size. She did the same to Bowser Jr.
Bowser: Now that really hurts.
Yoshi: (grabs rainbow cap) I’ll take that thanks.
Bowser: No!
Bowser got up, knocking Princess Daisy down. He tried to take the rainbow cap from Yoshi, which he did.
Bowser: I don’t need this anymore.
Princess Daisy: Then give it to us!
Bowser: Nope. Might as well throw it into the lava.
Princess Daisy: No!
Bowser immediately threw the rainbow cap into the lava. But before it sank…
Yoshi: Must save the Rainbow Cap!
Yoshi jumped into the lava pit. He did a Flutter Jump and he kicked the rainbow cap, giving it enough power to make it back on the ground.
Now Yoshi can’t do anything now. The only thing that Yoshi can do is fall into the lava. Yes, Yoshi has been a very good friend. She helped Princess Daisy overcome her fears and has sacrificed himself for the Rainbow Cap. But today is the time where Yoshi needs to die.
Princess Daisy: Yoshi!
Yoshi: (scorching in death) see ya, ya Prin, Princess, Daisy. It’s be, been a, a vet, very good, good quest, quest with, with you. (Gasps for breath, sinks in lava)
Princess Daisy: Yoshi! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Princess Daisy looks at Bowser.
Princess Daisy: (outraged) YOU! YOU KILLED MY FRIEND AND NOW YOU’RE NOT GOING TO SAY ANYTHING ABOUT HIM. I SO HATE YOU! YOU MAKE ME, MAD!
Because Princess Daisy was outraged, she had the ability to double the strength of her attacks double the length of her health, double everything!
Princess Daisy: (outraged) I’ AM SO GOING TO KICK YOUR BUTT!
Princess Daisy attacks were really strong. It was so strong that Bowser passed out within 2 hits! After that, she threw Bowser into the lava, and grabbed the rainbow cap.
When she walked home she met Luigi.
Luigi: Daisy! Where were you! I’ve been looking everywhere for you! It 4 hours past by birthday. Oh, and yes, the present?
Princess Daisy: (cries) here you go.
Luigi opens the present.
Luigi: A Rainbow Cap. Cool! Come on Princess Daisy; let’s have a cup with tea with Princess Peach and Mario.
Princess Daisy: (cries) No, I can’t.
Luigi: What’s wrong Princess Daisy?
Princess Daisy (cries) it’s just that…
Luigi: You can tell me about it Princess Daisy.
Princess Daisy: (cries) it’s about what happened a few hours ago.
Luigi: Okay.
Princess Daisy (cries) Remember when I told you I was going to get you the present I just bought?
Luigi: Yes.
Princess Daisy: (cries) Well, I actually lied about that. I didn’t buy the present when I said I actually did. So I rid on Yoshi and went to Coconut Mall to get the present. Unfortunately, Bowser stole the present which I and Yoshi actually had to go to his castle to retrieve the rainbow cap. When Bowser had enough of the present (he was bored of it) he was going to throw the present into the lava, but Yoshi saved it from sinking into the lava. He sacrificed himself and now he's dead! All because I overslept!
Luigi: Yoshi died? No, it can’t be!
Princess Daisy: (cries) it’s true. He really died.
Luigi: Oh dear.
At the tea party…
Mario: What’s taking so long? Princess Daisy and Luigi should be here right now!
Princess Peach: Do you hear that? We better check it out!
The funeral began. Yoshi’s coffin is seen lying on the ground.
Toad: We are here gathered to support the death of Yoshi. He’s a cool dinosaur and never lets us down. But on this day we will not let Yoshi down. 2010, Rest in Peace, Yoshi. (Cries for some reason.)
Toadette: (cries) He really has been a good friend to me!
Wario: (cries) I’m very funny, but this is very emotional!
Mario: (cries) my friend, GONE!
It’s the end of Yoshi’s life. So all of you Yoshi fans should start crying!
Alternative ending
For all of you who are crying and want the happy ending, well here it is!
Mario: (cries) my friend, GONE!
Just then…
Waluigi: Hey look! Yoshi’s back!
Everyone looked around. They saw Yoshi. They cheered.
Toadette: How did you come back? I thought you were dead!
Yoshi: I was lucky enough to grab a Cape Feather. But Bowser who also fell in the lava tried to stop me from grabbing that feather. But thanks to my flutter jump, I was able to attack Bowser and grab the Cape Feather
Just before I passed out. So here I am!
Toad: Wait. If you’re alive and you’re standing next to us then; who is really inside that coffin?
Yoshi: You must have mistaken me for: ‘THE DEAD BOWSER’!
Everyone cheers and laughs.
Luigi: Oh, and just one more thing Princess Daisy. Remember, you said you were lying?
Princess Daisy: (gulps) Uh huh.
Luigi: Toadsworth!
Toadsworth arrives.
Toadsworth: Thank you Master Luigi. It’s such a pleasure to invite me as a loser at your birthday.
Luigi: Can you do me a favor?
Toadsworth: Yes?
Luigi points at Princess Daisy and whispers in Toadsworth’s ear. Immediately, Toadsworth started to chase her.
Toadsworth: I’m going to get you!
Princess Daisy: Help? Somebody? (Screams)
Toadette: Weird.
Copyright by Nintendo®. All rights reserved. 2010 Nintendo®.

[SuperStar X]

Great Story, and its EPIC

BTW the longest story i ever seen, but still a great story

[Blablob]

It's not long, believe me....

As for chat stories standards, this is a step forward, but not by much. Work on grammar a little, make the plot a bit more interesting, and if you're not going to just stick to people chatting and actually have a 3rd person story here, why not make it into an actual story format?

[Worst_master]

Well, good, very very long, and many characters.The.... but 100% is chatting, like a chat box. Need more improvement.
The last setense is very weird.