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Halloween Story Contest 2017

Who wrote the best Halloween story this year?

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Halloween Story Contest 2017

Postby Raiyuuni » October 13th, 2017, 1:00 pm



H A L L O W E E N   S T O R Y   C O N T E S T   2 0 1 7


Is your inner writer so excited you just can't wait for NaNoWriMo? This ride is for you.

This is a once-in-a-year chance to go toe-to-toe with the old dogs in their home turf. There's no word count limit. Anything goes, from light-hearted, funny tales to more serious, sinister stories; but they've got to be Halloween themed.

There's a catch. Remember FF's story from a couple years back? If you go for something similar, tag it appropriately. And don't try to one-up that, or we'll have Alucard pay you a visit.



You've got until October 31ˢᵗ, 11:59 PM PST to show us your stories.
You may submit one entry each. Good luck!
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Re: Halloween Story Contest 2017

Postby Vajrin » October 13th, 2017, 5:26 pm

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Re: Halloween Story Contest 2017

Postby Magnen » October 13th, 2017, 7:43 pm

EDIT: Kinda wondering if anyone else is participating in this, but oh well! It's good writing practice.

Day In The Life of Luna: show
Hi, my name is Luna, and welcome to my story!

I go to only the best school ever- The Great Witch's School for Talented Young Witches! (It's a bit of a mouthful.) We have classes exclusively for Familiar training, spell casting, enchanting, and my personal favorite, potion brewing!

And the best part? It's built like a freaking castle! Fancy rugs, torches, random paintings of important people in hallways- we even have a throne room for the high witch! The only things that are a bit different are the rooms for sleeping and classrooms.

While standard, regular-people classes get regular classrooms, with old wooden tables and chairs lined up neatly in front of a chalkboard, the magic-classrooms are all custom to what you're doing!

Most of the sleeping areas are built with a bunch of bunk-beds so that most witches have to share, but I get a room all to myself, like the teachers do! (Don't ask me how I know where they sleep. That's a different story.)

Anyway, this story takes place on a particularly important day for my class. We were all supposed to brew up a special, relatively harmless potion for the Great Witch to test on a guinea pig of sorts (depending on the potion), as well as submit a report on our process and any side-effects that can occur. Brewing a potion for an assignment was pretty typical, but having the Great Witch herself test us was a pretty big deal, and my classmates were pretty nervous.

We begin when my classmate, Lacey, AKA the sweetest and most adorable person I have ever met, stopped by my room. She had been assigned to collect the potions and reports and hand them over to the higher-up teachers so they could prepare the testing subjects.



I was busy brewing up a potion to enhance my broom's flight when I heard a faint sound of knocking on my door.

"H-hey, have you, er... Finished your potion assignment, yet..?" Lacey timidly asked, just barely standing in my doorway.

"Yup! One sec, lemme just finish adding this ingredient." I said, lowering an enchanted pigeon's feather into the brew.

"W-wait, Luna, I don't think you're supposed to use-"

Boom.

The beaker I had been using shattered, and I was left with glass on my table, ringing in my ears and smoke on my face. I coughed, still tasting remnants from the potion.

"-pigeon feathers." Lacey sighed.

"Ah-ha-ha-ha, looks like I'll need to continue working on that recipe." I reached for a towel I had nearby to wipe my face off. "Anyway, let me get that report and potion for you." My vision still a little blurry, I wandered over to where I had left a folder next to a yellow, corked potion.

Lacey leaned against the doorframe while waiting. "Trouble really does follow you everywhere, doesn't it..." She looked over my room.

"Hm, say something, Lace?" I said, ears still ringing, and unsure if I had heard her correctly. I handed her the items of interest.

"N-nevermind. I'm going." Lacey set the items down in a tray she had placed on the floor outside my room, and flicked her wand, which looked like a unicorn horn, to levitate it into the air. "Just make sure you aren't late this time, Luna."

"I'm never late if I'm on Luna time!" I said, flashing a cheesy grin.

"Y-yeah, but I think that.. Well, the teachers don't um, 'like it' when you're on Luna time.."

"Hm..." I put my hand to my chin and made a thinking expression. "True, they always seem anxious for whatever reason... Which is weird, because I'm only ever late for good reasons!"

"L-like the time you chased Ryu through the halls?"

"Yeah, like that! It's rude to not have your familiar with you, you know! So I made sure he came with me, if I had to chase him while he was cranky in dragon form." I put my hands on my hips triumphantly.

"R-right... Well, see you later, Luna." And with that, Lacey left, leaving me alone in my room with my broken beaker and Ryu (who was currently an otter) pretending to be asleep on the floor.

"Shall I eat her for you?" Ryu asked me with his telepathy.

I spun on my heel to glare at Ryu. Sure, having a shape-shifting Familiar isn't normal, and having one that communicate with you telepathically is even weirder, but I had enough of his attitude.

"No eating anyone. And suddenly you feel like chatting?" I huffed out my chest in irritation.

"Hmph." Was all I got as he resumed ignoring me.

I shook my head and started to clean up the glass shards on my potion table. Not having anything to clean it with (the only broom I had was strictly for flying!) I was just using my hand to scoop the fragments into a trash can.

So naturally, just when I'm about to finish, I mess up and cut my finger on a tiny shard that had escaped my vision. "Ow!" I hold my finger and rush over to a cooling cabinet I had to store potions with healing properties. Meanwhile, the cut was starting to produce blood. "C'mon, where is it- ah, there we go!" I grabbed a potion filled with a light blue liquid and poured it onto my finger. The cut closed up instantly.

"Man, Amanda's so good at these healing potions. The ones I make are always messed up." I sigh, and put the potion back. "Now, where was I- hm?" A green potion hiding in the corner of the cabinet had caught my eye. Feeling like it didn't belong there, I pulled it out of the cabinet and turned the bottle over in my hand, trying to figure it out- and then I saw a small marking I had made on it.

This was the potion I was supposed to hand over to Lacey, which meant...
I face-palmed when I realized I had handed her something completely different. But what even was it? Hopefully not one of those potions-

Just to be sure, I walk over to the table where I kept my dangerous experimental potions, checking for anything that might be missing. Just my luck, one of them was gone. I started to panic and pace the floor.

Okay, so if my intended potion was supposed to be shaken and applied to a plot of grass for the intended effects, what was that potion going to do?

It only took me a couple of seconds, and I froze when I realized. The dangerous experimental potions were put in the farthest corner of the room from everything else because they were prone to causing explosions- and the one I had handed over did not like being shaken.

I ran and grabbed my broom, which had been leaning up against the wall, and the potion I had meant to hand over, attaching that to my belt with a bit of magic from my wand.

"Stay put, Ryu!" I called before jetting out the door and hopping onto my broom to take flight. Usage of a broom for flight was technically forbidden indoors, but this was an emergency.

I was not about to blow up the throne room!

Heading down the hall that would be the fastest way of getting there, I found myself suddenly knocked back by a magical barrier, with a sign behind it saying, 'Area Closed for Cleaning.'

I rapped my hand against the barrier, making a noise. "Hey, I need to get through here! It's urgent!"

The witch who was cleaning up the area, Susan, just scowled at me. "What, so you can make an even bigger mess for me to clean up? Forget it. Having to clean up the halls already sucks, I'm not letting you ruin it further."

"Argh, fine! I'll take the long way." I hop back onto my broom, getting ready to take the long way there.

"And quit flying around! You're making more work for all of us." Susan called out, but I was already speeding down the halls.

I grumbled as I flew through the fairly empty halls. This was going to take at least thirty more minutes, and they're bound to be almost done with the preparations by now- I have to hurry!

Just as I was about to speed up even faster, Ms. Gina, my Familiar-training teacher, turned the corner and caught me. With a swift motion with her wooden staff, she had stopped me and the broom from motion, dropped me onto the floor, and confiscated the broom in her other hand.

Ms. Gina shook her head. "Tsk tsk, how many times do I have to tell you Luna, no flying inside of the school-"

"Ms. Gina, please! It's an emergency-"

"You're receiving detention for a week and I'm banning you from using your broom for the rest of the day-"

"If you would just listen to me-"

Ms. Gina slammed her staff into the ground, emitting a small localized shockwave. "I've had enough of your excuses and stories. It's final. Now, since I've caught you, we're going to the throne room together, to make sure you aren't going to try to be late for it."

I wanted to tell her that I was planning on going there anyway, but figured she wouldn't buy that. "Fine, I'll meet you there-" I said, getting ready to sprint, when she suddenly grabbed me by the collar.

"We're going to walk, miss troublemaker."

Worried that she'd use magic on me if I kept trying, I stopped resisting and walked along with her, fidgeting with my hands. Since I hadn't heard any explosions, surely that must mean nothing had happened yet, right? Right?

I found myself completely incapable of settling down until we arrived in the throne room. Stained glass windows, a red rug leading up to a red throne with a gold trim and chandeliers hanging from the ceiling- anyone who'd never been here before would be impressed.

Not me, though. I'd been here so many times for one reason or another that I no longer found it all that impressive, and instead looked for faults, cracks, anything that made the place look less tidy.

Today though, it was a little bit different, with a bunch of small, sectioned off areas that were designated for each witch's potion testing. After thoroughly scanning the area, I found a grass plot with my potion sitting on a stand next to it.

Just when I was thinking that maybe it'll be okay as long as I can switch the potions, the experimental potion changed color, indicating that someone had already shaken it, and that there wasn't a lot of time left before it blew up.

I raced over and swapped the potions. I didn't know how big of an explosion it could cause, but I knew that blowing up the throne room would probably get me suspended, or worse.

Potion now attached to my belt and ready for detonation, I realized that I was going to need to get to my room and defuse it. I flicked my wand, using it to bring my broom back to me, and got on before flying away, much to a dumbfounded Ms. Gina's dismay.

Holding onto the broom with one hand and using the other hand to hold onto my wand, I used magic to form a barrier around me so that nobody would get blown up, and headed to the shortcut, hoping Susan was gone by now.

Well, she wasn't but I just used my magic to take her barrier down this time and fly by quickly, making a bit of a mess in my wake. She brought out her wand to inflict a curse or two on me, but I was going too fast for her to hit accurately.

I literally knocked down my own room's door to get in, and immediately got to work on adding things to the potion so that it wouldn't explode. After frantically adding things and putting a barrier around the potion, a few tense moments passed before it finally turned back to its original lemon color. I exhaled and let myself fall backwards onto the floor, relieved.

"That was too close, Ryu..." I muttered.

I sat up and dusted myself off... Just to notice Ryu now missing. Sounds of students screaming and a dragon roaring filled my ears. I had forgotten to feed him on time again.

I stood up and stamped me feet on the ground in frustration. Of course my familiar might as well be his own ticking time bomb. I grabbed my broom and got on, getting ready to defuse yet another situation.



That's the end of my story, did ya like it? It's a bit short, but settling Ryu down is something that if you've seen once, you've seen it all the time! In the end, the throne room got a bit torched, and I ended up with more that just a week of detention for my punishment.

But hey, that's the price you pay for going to a school like mine!


~~End~~
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Re: Halloween Story Contest 2017

Postby MessengerOfDreams » October 16th, 2017, 7:13 am

Now, she will try
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Re: Halloween Story Contest 2017

Postby MessengerOfDreams » October 30th, 2017, 8:56 pm

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Re: Halloween Story Contest 2017

Postby KABOOM » October 31st, 2017, 7:24 am

I tried, and isn't that what really matters in the end?...No.: show
A full moon cast a dim light over the three figures as they advanced up to the door of the house on the hill. The leader of the group knocked on the door. A walker hit the wooden floor, clunk, clunk, and the door swung open.
"Trick-or-treat!"
Mrs. Mariel looked down at the children. A girl wearing a sweeping black cape twice as long as she was tall - "Oh, Ina, so good to see you! You've grown so much, it seems like just yesterday you weren't no bigger than a kitten!"
"Nice to see you too, Mrs. Mariel." Ina gave a great big grin, exposing her plastic fangs. "Oh, is Mr. Mariel here?"
"'Fraid not, sweetie, not tonight. George is at his monthly meeting, or so he told me."
"Well, hold onto this for him, will ya?" Ina brought from behind her cape a small box, about as big as a dictionary but not quite as heavy. "Dad said to give this back to him."
"Oh, of course! Thanks so much for bringing this over!" Mrs. Mariel said, setting the box next to the big bowl of candy that Ina now set her eyes on.

Mrs. Mariel's gaze turned next to a boy wearing an eyepatch, a bright red jacket, and a large hat stamped with a skull-and-crossbones. "Dev, it's good to see you too! But shouldn't Jay be out with you?"
Dev looked down at the ground. "H-he couldn't."
"Oh, right, I forgot. How silly of me. Say hi to him for me, won't you?" Mrs. Mariel's voice was sullen, but she kept the smile on her face as she turned her head to the last of the three.

The last child had delicately designed butterfly wings, glittery pink hair, and a face that Mrs. Mariel hadn't seen before. "And you are...?"
"Robin." The child let go of the name reluctantly, as if it were worth more than every piece of candy in the blue pillowcase they held. Mrs. Mariel thought about asking Robin where they lived, but they didn't seem too eager to answer, and Ina and Dev were both staring at the candy bowl expectantly.

All in all, it was a fine group, and one that clearly knew what they were here for. Mrs. Mariel took a handful of candy from the bowl. "All right, now-"

BARK!

A large, gray dog poked its long nose around the corner. At the sound of its bark, Dev screamed and took a step back. But Ina ran forward to greet the dog, patting its head and rubbing its neck. "I didn't know you had a dog, Mrs. Mariel."
"Well, here he is, isn't he? Now, don't rub him like that, it bothers him."
Ina obligingly backed off, and the dog disappeared back into the house. Dev was coaxed into coming back up to the door.
"Now, here's your candy. Show me your baskets!"
Two big chocolate bars fell into Ina's white pillowcase. "Thanks, Mrs. Mariel!" A lollipop and a few pieces of gum into Dev's plastic basket, and a peanut butter cup for Jay. "T-thank you." And for the unfamiliar Robin, Mrs. Mariel handed over a little bit of everything, which slid wordlessly into the blue pillowcase.
With cries of "Happy Halloween!" all around, the door closed, and the children left, ready for the next house on the street.




A loud clunk sounded outside the window. Jay stirred, blinked blearily for a moment, then lifted his head. He couldn't see anything outside the window, but Dev was up too, so he must have heard it as well. "What was that?"
"I'll look." Dev stretched, stepped out of bed, walked past Jay's bed over to the window at the far side of the room, and looked around. Still nothing. Then he looked down.
Just below the window lay a blue pillowcase.

Robin bounded through the woods, skipping lightly over every log and stone in their path. In the solitude of the forest the timidity that Mrs. Mariel saw was gone, replaced with a boundless enthusiasm - and as they recalled the children who had accepted them into the group without a second thought, their smile grew even wider.
At length Robin stepped into a clearing. Stooping down, they brushed their fingers against the grass. This was something they had never felt before this night, and would not get to feel for at least another year. They couldn't help feeling a little jealous of their new friends, who got to experience this every day - but here was something to look forward to, for next year.
Then Robin's wings fluttered, and with a kick they jumped into the air and flew off out of sight.

As Mrs. Mariel brushed her teeth and washed her face, she looked out her tiny bathroom window. The full moon illuminated streets and sidewalks that were now clear of trick-or-treaters. She thought about how excited Ina was to pet the dog. "Maybe we ought to get a dog, one of these days," she called out to the other room. "What do you think, George?"

George barked.
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Re: Halloween Story Contest 2017

Postby Raiyuuni » November 15th, 2017, 7:00 am

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Our most sp :blab: :blab:ky writer this year was...


Mag. Witch Luna, with 2 votes!

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Postby KABOOM » November 15th, 2017, 11:47 am

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